Nargles

Hey firstly thanks for the review, I sorta get where you're coming from and I understand that. I'll work on what you're talking about. Thanks :)

WOW. This is brilliant. This is now my favourite poem I have read on here so far. There is really nothing I can say against this, it's too perfect. It ...

Oh well glad I helped!! :)

Thanks heap for the review, I don't mind waiting! It was some greatly needed advice thank you! :) :)

Thanks for the review, it was really helpful! :)

Hey this is good, a bit cliché but good. I liked the last verse the best, for me it really symbolised what the song was about good work! Keep it ...

Thanks for the review. I still can't seem to centre it but will try. It's probably just me. :)

Hi, I love this poem in a weird sort of way. It is beautifully done for the most part and the use of metaphors is brilliant! The only real thing ...

I know that you don't want to hear this but it reminded me of Voldemort!

I love it, beautifully written and so much imagery! Great!

I don't mind this, it isn't my favourite ever poem but it's not bad. I agree completely on the topic though! Good job!

I like this a lot! Will review it later but good job!

Thanks, I get where you are coming from, truly. :)

Thanks heaps, feel free to check out my other stuff!! Also I have read some of your stuff too, not bad either!!

*love not laugh. oops! :)