Nargles

Hey! This is super powerful, and I think regardless of anyones views on the whole issue of abortion people will connect to this. In different ways, but they will connect ...

Hey! Good poem. I myself have never been a massive fan if rhyming poems because they can come across as super childish and silly. But I liked this one, because ...

Hey! Go reviewlution! I saw that this one had only 2 reviews, so I thought I'ld check it out. This is good, I really enjoyed it. It's simple and to ...

Hey! I'm here to review for you, fellow red team member. So, what I loved most about this poem is how you managed to create a picture of different music ...

Hey! I'm here to review for you. So, let's get down to business. What I loved about this poem was the way in which you described each event or object. ...

Hey! This is awesome. I really enjoyed it, it's interesting and different. One thing that I feel could be changed is the use of "cue" so often. It sounds and ...

Ohhhh, Haikus. I don't know much about haikus. But, these are really good. I like how you took certain elements from nature, and constructed some really beautiful poems. My favourite ...

Hey! I'm here to offer you a good review (hopefully) So, I really enjoyed this, I feel as if you captured innocence and childhood really well. I also like how ...

Hey! So, I haven't read Of Mice and Men yet, I know I should, but you are going to have to excuse that as I review, because I may not ...

Hey! You have the honour of receiving my first review. So, what was good about this poem? Well the repetition of "My skin is just flakes" I really liked. You ...

Hey, I finally got around to reading this. I think that this is beautiful, truly. And, whilst I have never experienced anything close to this, the message is still so ...

Hey, this is really good and I hope I can leave a good review that will help improve your writing. I like the idea behind this, I really do, and ...

Well, I'm not really sure what to make of this. It's different that's for sure. I like the voice you used for the mole, it was original and humorous. I ...

This is better, the separating into stanzas is good and makes for an easier read. You have incorporated more imagery which is great. Keep revising your work and keep editing ...

Hmm, this is good and I like the idea behind it but I feel as if it just doesn't evoke enough emotions for me. As I was reading it, I ...