MythWriter99

Hey C, I loved this work. it was interesting and fun to read. You are a really great writer. But one problem I had was that I don't quite get ...

Okay so there are quite a few grammatical errors in this piece. It makes reading your work somewhat difficult, but I could still understand it pretty well. I liked this ...

Hmmmm . . . I'm interested to read more. This story seems totally interesting. I look forward to reading more. Although there were a few typing errors, so I would ...

This chapter is totally cool. It really caught my attention from the start. I'm looking forward to reading more. I like how you have the character talk to the reader, ...

Okay so I like how you jump from character to character, having them tell the story. I always enjoy this way of writing, it let's you really get to know ...

Okay so I couldn't make it all the way through this chapter because it's just really confusing. I can't figure out what's going on, I mean it's just hard to ...

Well this is one of my favorite stories that I have read on YWS. It's funny, interesting and really entertaining. I look forward to reading more. My favorite part is ...

First of all, nice work. This story was interesting but like Sherlock said you need to add something to the story that allows the readers to get more emotionally attached ...

Okay so I still love the story line, it's fun and interesting. I love the fun bubbly personality of Zi, she's so cute. Wow that's a weird thing to say ...

Okay first off, I'm totally reading the rest of this book. I like the storyline so far, it's definitely interesting. Although the setting was a little unclear, but that was ...

I agree with Lycando. While it's not horrible to have a faster paced novel yours is too fast. But I would honestly stick with the wacky behavior on Molly's part. ...

Okay I pushed through the question marks and odd formatting read your work. I like the general idea of the story. It's interesting and can either make a really sad ...

Wow. I like the story. But i think you should expand a little more on the mistake. What exactly was the mistake? How did it relate to the wife's death? ...

Wow Maddy, this is great. I mean it's a little dark when did a little darkness ever hurt anyone. I like how it sounds. It's short and to the point ...

Arrrgh! You keep ending the chapter right when things get interesting! Okay so far we have a ghost, a wizard, and a boy who can see ghosts, oh and the ...