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Re: 1
Hey! I was attracted to your poem by its name. I really liked the starting as you describe how people have specific fears which kind of fade away, perhaps the ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: Wishes For a Nameless Girl
I had the same feeling when someone told me the stories of victims of the holocaust. There was this one boy... Simon. It is truly heart breaking how thousands had ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: Sunburnt and Broken Hearted
Your poem is truly beautiful..... I love the perfect way in which you have expressed yourself, how each line flows so smoothly into the next, your fantastic descriptions of emotions. ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: Fly
Let me start by saying that i love your name, 'defiant authoress' :D And now onto the poem: it's amazing. I can totally understand the scene that you are trying ...
Mar 15, 2014 -
Re: Rain
When i read the tile i expected something typical and cliche but i have to say that you surprised me. I loved your poem, i loved the depth of the ...
Mar 15, 2014 -
Re: I am
I started reading this because your other poem fascinated me. :D Again, I'm in love with the theme. It's remarkable, how you capture the essence of the theme and express ...
Jan 23, 2014 -
Re: I Declare War
Well done!! This is a very well written poem, the flow isn't quite right in certain places but I'm willing to ignore all that for the theme. I love your ...
Jan 23, 2014 -
Re: Under
Whoa!! I love this poem.... It's one of the rare cases where a rhyme scheme helps along with the flow, I'm amazed by how you used the scheme to help ...
Jan 20, 2014 -
Re: A Goodnight Dream
This is seriously your first poem?? It's VERY good, no kidding !! i thought it would be a short, stereotypical abstract about dreams but... whoa !! It has a splendid ...
Jan 19, 2014 -
Re: Abstract Seasoning
W O W. This was simply brilliant !!! I simply LOVE such poems, I read another poem like this a short while ago. When i say "like this" i mean ...
Jan 19, 2014 -
Re: Rebirth
This is a beautiful poem. "The bird singing to nature's love song, restored the rhythm back into my heart." Yep, your poem too keeps a steady rhythm. I love your ...
Jan 19, 2014 -
Re: The Man Inside
Though your concept is really good, it isn't quite clear in the poem. Nor is this very realistic, you need to have a sound example to support what you are ...
Jan 11, 2014 -
Re: The Color of Pain
I am speechless....... This was AMAZING, JUST AMAZING!!! The words, the flow, the vivid picturisation, the depth of your emotions, the title!!! "That the truth in you is worthless... And ...
Jan 11, 2014 -
Re: The Shadowed Pack- Prologue & Chapter 1
Hello!! I like your plot, this a very very interesting theme. When it comes to the description of the fight, i applaud you!!That is something i try in every story ...
Jan 11, 2014 -
Re: Scroll of a Writer's Life
Hey! Let me tell you that you are a VERY talented poet.... You have chosen the perfect words in each and every line, I am in awe of the way ...
Jan 9, 2014
