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Mystique

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: 1

    Hey! I was attracted to your poem by its name. I really liked the starting as you describe how people have specific fears which kind of fade away, perhaps the ...

    Jun 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, General Re: Wishes For a Nameless Girl

    I had the same feeling when someone told me the stories of victims of the holocaust. There was this one boy... Simon. It is truly heart breaking how thousands had ...

    Jun 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Sunburnt and Broken Hearted

    Your poem is truly beautiful..... I love the perfect way in which you have expressed yourself, how each line flows so smoothly into the next, your fantastic descriptions of emotions. ...

    Jun 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Fly

    Let me start by saying that i love your name, 'defiant authoress' :D And now onto the poem: it's amazing. I can totally understand the scene that you are trying ...

    Mar 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Rain

    When i read the tile i expected something typical and cliche but i have to say that you surprised me. I loved your poem, i loved the depth of the ...

    Mar 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: I am

    I started reading this because your other poem fascinated me. :D Again, I'm in love with the theme. It's remarkable, how you capture the essence of the theme and express ...

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Declare War

    Well done!! This is a very well written poem, the flow isn't quite right in certain places but I'm willing to ignore all that for the theme. I love your ...

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: Under

    Whoa!! I love this poem.... It's one of the rare cases where a rhyme scheme helps along with the flow, I'm amazed by how you used the scheme to help ...

    Jan 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Narrative Re: A Goodnight Dream

    This is seriously your first poem?? It's VERY good, no kidding !! i thought it would be a short, stereotypical abstract about dreams but... whoa !! It has a splendid ...

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Abstract Seasoning

    W O W. This was simply brilliant !!! I simply LOVE such poems, I read another poem like this a short while ago. When i say "like this" i mean ...

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Rebirth

    This is a beautiful poem. "The bird singing to nature's love song, restored the rhythm back into my heart." Yep, your poem too keeps a steady rhythm. I love your ...

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: The Man Inside

    Though your concept is really good, it isn't quite clear in the poem. Nor is this very realistic, you need to have a sound example to support what you are ...

    Jan 11, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Color of Pain

    I am speechless....... This was AMAZING, JUST AMAZING!!! The words, the flow, the vivid picturisation, the depth of your emotions, the title!!! "That the truth in you is worthless... And ...

    Jan 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: The Shadowed Pack- Prologue & Chapter 1

    Hello!! I like your plot, this a very very interesting theme. When it comes to the description of the fight, i applaud you!!That is something i try in every story ...

    Jan 11, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Scroll of a Writer's Life

    Hey! Let me tell you that you are a VERY talented poet.... You have chosen the perfect words in each and every line, I am in awe of the way ...

    Jan 9, 2014


You know how hard it is to feel like an extreme falcon-headed combat machine when somebody calls you "chicken man"?
— Rick Riordan, The Red Pyramid