Mysticalxx

P.S I want to see more of your work!

I love your expressions and your way of writing! Keep it up!

I like it!

Ah! Write more1 You left off at such a suspenseful part! Ugh. Your grammar is really good and so is your descriptive sense in writing. PLease update soon!

All you've written in your article is true, but I'm 'fraid to say that it doesn't really capture the reader's attention. You should try to make it more metaphoric and ...

I like the prophecy! It seems mysterious. Update soon! Also, I like your lyrical and vivid way of writing, although you did make a few grammatical errors. Keep it up.

Hahaha! I like the poem, your grammar isn't perfect but it's humorous! Keep it up!

thanks! I will

The theme is good but I'd like to tell you that the poem is quite.......ambiguous. I mean, if I hadn;t read the description I wouldn't be able to get what ...

Hi. I like your poem but I have to say that the first stanza is a bit....ambiguous. It isn't giving the message clearly that you want to give. Aside from ...

Thank of very much, priceofwoods! This is not my first poem, actually, I have written a lot of poems throughout my writing time. This is my best poem, though. Thanks ...

I like them!