Mysticalxx

I'm not usually one for romantic poetry, but this was cute and simple. :) I think you did just one type, where you wrote 'herart' instead of 'heart'. That's easy ...

Very, very. very true! :) Nice work! I am always telling my family stuff like this, and they are always rolling their eyes and telling me to stop being so ...

Haha, cute!

Aw, this is so sweet. Your sister clearly loves you! :)

It's a cute poem! Although I dom't much understand it. :)

Wow, this was very good and actually interesting, not at all boring like I was somewhat expecting it to be. There are a few mistakes, which I think are typos ...

Thanks for everything you said? But I've got a question: What do I need to punctuate? I mean. the lines of my poem are so short, so i figured that ...

Thanks for the advice and compliments! :)I actually meant for the poem to have a lot of 'its' but if it seems weird to readers, then I'll fix it. Thanks ...

Good job! The irony of this text made me snicker. One thing: I'm not sure this is a haiku, since haiku have to be about some subject, like a season ...

Aw......it's a really cute poem! In the third line, of the first stanza, though, it should be ''Here's'', not heres. Just a teeny grammatical error. Otherwise, it's a nice poem! ...

Oh, yeah! I hadn't thought of that. Good work, anyhow!

Oh, yeah! I hadn't thought of that. Good work, anyhow!

Thank you, thank you! I really appreciate the advice. I know that I didn't keep the correct count of syllables in the second line of the first haiku, and I ...

Haha! Brilliant.

The poem is definitely silly, but I like it. You've just made a mistake: In the first line, you say " Sometimes I WONDER", which is present tense. Then onwards, ...