Mysticalxx

Hahahaha! I actually wasn't expecting this, but this cracked me up! Wow, this cat has got some deep stuff to say! :P Anyways, this was very innovative! I imagine you ...

Hahaha! Smooth. It's a really interesting and novel theme, and it's funny too. Just a few things: "Life happens once in million years" isn't a correct sentence, it should be ...

Okay......interesting theme! I must say you did a good job of rhyming, and the lyrics are.........interesting to say in the least. Just a few things: What does "She's trashing Agath ...

Wow...........beautiful poem! The ending is VERY good. And so is the beginning. I'll tell you the lines I liked best: " A whisper of a star". Amazing use of figurative ...

It's really good! I mean it. The style of poetry is so.........good! Is this a specific type of poetry? Whatever it is, you've applied wonderful vocabulary and figurative language. I ...

Wow, these are really cool! You've used wonderful expression. I think you mixed up the syllable count just a little bit, though. But that's okay, we all know writing haiku ...

Hmm. interesting poem. Though I got rather confused at the sudden turn of feelings in the last few stanzas. I mean, first the boy says that he thinks its silly ...

Hmm.........interesting theme! I like it very much! Keep writing, when will you update? there aren't any punctuation errors, from what I can see. And your grammar is good. I like ...

I'm excited you're writing this, as I am a fan of Greek Mythology. Your vocabulary is good. But there're a few things: First off, the start is really cliche. I ...

Hi! The theme of this poem is nice, and funny too. But I'm afraid that the poem you've wrote.....isn't exactly a poem. For one, some lines a re too long ...

Really good poem! I like your style of writing, and you used wonderful figurative language and expressions. :) Just a few things: ''Desqualify" isn't a word, it's "Disqualify". Overall, the ...

Wow! It turned so morbid in the end! (in a good way, though). VERY interesting theme, and it's quite nice. A few things : The line " she freshly picks ...

This was quite descriptive, and well written. However, a few things: The term ''through LEAKS between the clouds'' doesn't sound right. Maybe you could change it to "through GAPS between ...

This poem was quite..........different. It made me think...... You seem to have written the expression ''day by day'' repetitively, so I would suggest you find another term as it doesn't ...

Okay, this was nice! But I'd like if you didn't use swear words, because it makes me uncomfortable reading a story with that sort of langauge. I mean, you could ...