Mysticalxx

I LOVE this style of poetry, even if it uses themes I don't like. (Not that I don't like this theme, just saying generally). I don't even mind how you ...

Haha, nice one. But the thing is, this can't really count as a haiku, because from what I know, haiku are supposed to be about some SOLID subject, like nature, ...

Aha! Nice and simple poem, and it's very true. :) A few things, though: 1. The poem is pretty much self-explanatory, but I think if you used figurative language more, ...

Haha, cool poem! You've done a good job describing each level of "royalty", as we shall say. You could change the title to a better one, though. :P So on ...

Wow! Really, nice, short, simple, heartwarming poem that inspired me! Good job. I'm glad you're overcoming your issues. Thumbs up to you! :D Although there are a few grammatical errors ...

Simple..........and unusual. That sums up your poem ( At least, that's what I think). So.......It's a good attempt. It could be better, though. For one,you've given the poem a repetitive ...

I like the funny, jolly essence of this poem! It's rather like a Christmas song, don't you think? Anyhow, good job! Just a few tiny errors: The first line : ...

I totally agree! I mean, before reading the Hunger Games trilogy, I was sort of scoff-ish about it and under the assumption that it was another mushy romance thingy like ...

Hahaha! This poem's aggressive and forceful nature made me laugh! It's like you're FORCING the poor bloke to keep flying! HAHAHAHA! I like it! This poem is........unusual. And that's why ...

Hahaha, fun poem! It's cute. Although personally, I have never been bothered by my toaster, since it just gives a little popping sound. It's the BLENDER that really gets on ...

This is so............................AWWWWWWWWW! This is exactly how I used to feel about my cats. They annoyed me to no end, yet I never wanted them to go away. :) This ...

Haha! It's really good, considering you had only twenty minutes to write it. I've not heard of the Old Mother Hubbard rhyme, though (I'm an Asian :) ) I love ...

Wow! I LOVED this poem! I usually get bored of reading narrative poetry, but this one somehow.......gripped me. Congrats! There are a few things you might want to correct though: ...

Really, really good job! Although you've not kept the syllable count right in ALL the lines, it can't be perfect, right? And they are really good. I mean it. So ...

Alright.......interesting theme but really, really confusing. There are three different scenarios, right? All in different places? Well, then you should break it down into Scene 1, Scene 2 and so ...