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Haha! I love this poem. It has a sense of ........shall we say, innocence and childishness in it. Not that you are childish. I like this sense. I'm just a ...

Wow! The wording and the vocabulary is really great, but just a thing: Isn't a haiku supposed to be like 5 syllables in first line, 7 in middle line, and ...

A few things: 'We giggled, laughed and cried like kings,' In this sentence, the simile made to kings doesn't really sound right. I mean, do kings GIGGLE? In the sentence ...

In the sentence 'Your behind, someone points out', it should be 'YOU'RE behind'. 'Your' is a possessive noun, like your stuff or your book. 'You're' is the contraction of YOU ...

If this is the true story of your life, then I am deeply touched and impressed that you had the guts to post something like this for the public eye ...

It's the same case with me. I read Harry Potter in my childhood (at the age of seven, I read the first book), and I cannot really find any rival ...

There are a few technical errors. Firstly, I think you used the wrong "flare". Isn't it supposed to be 'flair'? Because "flare" means to ignite, and "flair" means beauty, style. ...

Alright. I have to say that I didn't understand the plot line-is she committing suicide or something-but it is definitely a well written story. I like the ending and the ...

Hello! I have been tryng so much to find such articles that address world crises and I'm not disappointed. Although your grammatical skills need a bit of work, I say ...

I love these things! I like how you are using references from books and mvoies to compare to real life problems. My favourite essay is : Why are books so ...

Hi1 I liked this article as it addressed one of the most important issues in our society nowadays. People are constantly trying to portray and mimic their supposed role models ...

Wow, wow. First of all, your description and expressive way of writing is impressive. I loved this paragraph! The beginning is just fit and you never lose attention throughout reading. ...

Alright, so I never read this type of poem before. I like the lyrical way of writing, and you're right. All big animals are, well, dangerous, so why single out ...