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Ah........interesting concept! I like the theme. A few things: What do you mean by " finding his perfect life in the LISTS OF A GLOSSARY?" I don't get it. :) ...

I love the theme of this, it's very true. But I don't think this can be called a poem. You should break down the lines into stanzas, as it would ...

Wow! This is certainly an unusual poem, written quite uniquely, and I like it! I love the references to black cherries. I love cherries! There aren't any grammatical errors, so ...

Okay............ First thing, I like the concept of the poem, but it seems (to me) that you've made a bit of a mistake. Like you are saying "Leaves may be ...

This was good, Mialynire! Just a few teeny errors: The second line of the second stanza " We found each other sharing a strong bond", it should be " We ...

Hi! I want to tell you that the theme of your story is very good, but somehow the teary-eyed effect it should've had is ruined by the grammatical errors. Please ...

This is about C.S Lewis, isn't it? :) Is it? I mean, I got it from the reference " Like a snowy witch who from a lion fled". I love ...

Okay, the poem is good, especially the line " A flash of braid is all you'll see ". It gives a lyrical and nice sense. But one suggestion: You shouldn't ...

I like it! It has every quality that a children's poem should have (I mean it in a good way, writing poems for children isn't all that easy, and it's ...

Wow! Really good! I HATE math with all my soul, so I'M not sorry for having a grudge against it, like you say in the poem! But it's really good. ...

Wow! Did the bullies really left you after you gave them this? Not that your writing isn't good, but I didn't think bullies could be defeated by giving them messages. ...

HAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHA! Short, to the point, and HILARIOUS! That's what I like about this poem! :) Thumbs up! I'm still grinning like an idiot! :) Just one thing: Instead of writing ...

hahaha! I liked the melodrama of this poem! For some reason, the line " And pouuuur" had me laughing a lot. I mean, it just seems so funnily silly. And ...

This unusual, In a good way. It reminds me of dark and serious lyrics from a professional author, and it resembles some old kind of proverb. So, overall, I was ...

HAHA! Nice poem! The first stanza had me grimacing, though. " made from old sows' ears and dead calves feet" REALLY? I wonder if they DO serve that...........ugh, anyway thank ...