I like it! It has every quality that a children's poem should have (I mean it in a good way, writing poems for children isn't all that easy, and it's a form of art).
I don't really have any other comments about this. It's simple and straightforward, my favourite points. Good job! Write more poetry like this, on 'Friday' or stuff like that.
Keep it up!
Mysticalxx
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