Mysticalxx

AHHHH! Really cute poem....although it was a bit too fluffy, but I like it. It's really good. Short, and simple, with no fancy words.........somehow this all goes together in this ...

Interesting poem! I quite likethe way you've described yourself, in strange and unique aspects. I think all of us CAN relate a little to this poem. For some reason, I ...

Hi! I love Maggi noodles as well..............................so, nice one!!! I must admit this poem did have a humorous sense to it. However, the issue is that it's sort of.....ambiguous. I ...

cute!!!!!!!!!!!! I love pandas, and this poem has such a warm feeling of.......childishness and innocence that I can say nothing about it. It's a really sweet poem. Congrats on giving ...

So........definitely a novel type of poetry! I must say it's an.....unusual poem, and I like it for that. But, for some reason, it gives me a sense of .....incompletion. I ...

Impressive. Really, really good poem. Your potential is startling, you know? The wording of the poem, the way you phrased the lines--they're dripping with expression. And you outlined "being a ...

Nice! In fact, it's a really cute little poem. Brimming with encouragement, humour and welcome-good job! The rhyming made it all the more fun to read. Just a bit of ...

Wow, deep poem! The way I understand it, it's about a ruler who's struggling to rule properly, and just can't watch his empire crumble away, right? So, really nice poem! ...

HAHAHAHAHAHA! This poem is SOOOOOOO relatable, because in my family, I'M the one who's left with kitchen duty! (mostly) Hahaha. So, nice job! I love the exasperated air of this ...

Cool! Good one! I like this haiku as much as I did the Party one. The syllable count is perfect, (at least, I think it is) and the expression you've ...

So cute! Hahaha, I loved the humour of this haiku. HAHA---"Marinated in cigarette smoke"! That's a wonderful expression. And the phrase "I left right" was hilarious too. Keep it up! ...

Hahahaha! So relatable! (In fact, I think every die hard writer can relate to this). So, nice poem! I especially liked these lyrics: "I fell for a hero Composed of ...

firstly I want to say that these cant exactly classify as haiku, because haiku follow the 5-7-5 syllable rule, and you seem to have overlooked that. Seconsly, I think the ...

Really nostalgic poem! :D About family time, you know. I also started thinking about all the fun I had had with older siblings! Anyway, nice work! I like the form ...

Haha! This is the exact distressing dilemma I face in my math class........everyday! :( Math is REALLY YUCK. Anyway, good poem! I love reading all poems about math-haters, or the ...