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This poem came out really good when I was randomly writing. Hope you like it! When I see your eyes, There is nothing to despise, But all those boyish lies, ...

Blood The waterfall comes pouring down,Elegantly reflecting the sky,Morning, warning, deathAs the scene is a full on lie. It is meant to be short and simple.

since you all wanted me to change it, then I have: I touch his soft red rosy lips, Trace the pattern with my finger tips, He grins at me and ...

Photographs placed in your mind from vivid imagery Of all the poems you have read and remembered Every time you think of a poem Mine will come to mind Just ...

Ever so gracefully she lands on the floor, Computer surrounding and an open door, She turns to see something impossible, A memory from the past and stable, Lara walks slowly ...

thats so far of my book! hope you like it. it seems similar to his dark materials but it isn't, the animals aren't demons and in the later part of ...

I just wrote this now... it's a bit for Altair after the end of the game...enjoy ALTAIRSlowly, and carefully, Altair approached his victim smoothly and with ease. The crowd were ...

My other version was a drafter version... this version is probably much better. There will probably be some improvements or grammar... things like that. It'd be nice if you could ...

This is a bit of my new book i've been writing. it's being reviewed now. i got to a young writers group. here's a bit of it. HuntedThere might be ...

A bit of my story.. i have a lot going at the moment... i started it a while ago and occasionaly i'll add bits. i know there'll be bits which ...

I read this out at a young writers open mic... i was very nervous lol. enjoy. I smelt freshly cut grass by the forest, and the smell of blood pulsing ...

I don’t care if you cry,If you cry over water,I don’t care if you die,If you die under water,And oh oh, you broke my heart,Oh oh oh, I’m back to ...

I wrote this in my new twilight journal i got for christmas.... my brother likes it, he smiled when he read it because he thinks it's good. My mum's bf ...

This is what i have wrote so far... my mum read a bit of it and i guess there's work that needs doing. but hope you like what i've done ...

A bit of my sci-fi novel i started earlier. Hope you like and any suggesitons would be helpful!!!Standing on the top of the hill, I smiled as I stared at ...

The new planetStanding on the top of the hill, I smiled as I stared at the beautiful scene ahead of me. Trees, tall and green, coated in a thick layer ...

It's very long but please don't stop because of it... this is my drafted version which is being reviewed. you saw a preview and so here is part 1. when ...

Just page one of my story i left a while ago. Part One – the before time. Locked in a memory The silent night flooded the dark corridor of an ...

Yeah yeah, most people might know by now I'm a big Avatar fan! I just wrote this in my citizenship lesson after i finished my work. I stared at the ...

I just wrote my best Morganville fan ficiton... well.. i think it's good. please take your time in reading it... point out any mistakes and most commonly, mine is in ...

i sarted this ages ago for a magazine fiction section, but they stopped having it in their magazine so i decided to carry on with it and so i am ...

So i'm reading this out at a youngwriters exhibition tomorrow... i need a lot of confidence! are there any improvements that can be made? if so your help is appreciated!Slowly ...

Two poems... one is 'I am' and one is 'I am from'... please read them carefully as i'm going to try and read these out at an exhibition tomorrow. I ...

Ok, so i'm sharing chapter one, i have only done two chapters and have starting the third, but i'd like your opinions on this extract.Chapter one ~ Dark angelI don’t ...

This is chapter two of my story... it'll be a while before chapter 3 is posted and so on since i haven't actually written those yet ha ha. enjoy anyway. ...

This is quite long, i have trouble with tenses, and if you notice me jumping back between past and present, please spot it for me. And don't let the fact ...

This is chapter one of my twilight fan fiction, i still haven't written chapter two because i'm quite busy. But i'll post each chapter on here and each time i ...

His lips brushed against mine and sent and electrifying shiver down my spine. I groped for his hair and pulled him closer, our bodies were entwined as we kissed and ...

I scream as a hideous demon pins me to the ground. Its hands grope for my guts, I squeal and wriggle, trying to get free. I fail. The fingers have ...

The sun was blindingly bright and yet so deadly. Today was the day the sun was supposed to die. Of course I felt frightened, but what can you do when ...

Ok... i'm a huge skins fan at the moment, just had to write a short fan fic about Tony *HUGE SPOILER*Black, nothingness... i could see nothing. I wanted to move ...

This is just a bit of my story, it's the redrafted version... I'm changing a few things, but the plot etc is all going to be the same. Or slightly ...

This is just a beginning bit i have drafted today to a short story i'm writing. Please review it. xDPROLOGUEThe moment when everything seems to be ok, but it’s not. ...

I thought of writing this last night, and it's about the loss of a loved one. Someone very close to me who died recently. Anyway, tell me what you think. ...

This is my little introduction i wrote at school today. I'm going to write some more, and i hope you like it. Please review it, it'd help me a lot.1942 ...

Something doesn't feel right about this, but i was thinking maybe you could possibly point out my grammar mistakes and tenses, since i often mix past and present terribly. >.

This is just what i've written of my fan fiction so far, it would help if you've seen every season up until now. Season 6. PROLOGUEAs the two brothers step ...

I remember you guys wanted to me to carry on, so i did. =D I'm busy at the moment, so chapter two will probably be along next month or something. ...

2006, Cawthorne, England, UK, Europe 13:45…“Gracie!” Yelled Stella as she clambered over a few guys who were securing their parachutes and keeping everything in check. “Gracie we’re gonna be

There are actually italics in the original version in required places, but i'm lazy and can't be bothered to actually edit them in. *guilty*.

2“Who sent you? How do you know my name?”The questions kept coming, Ezio kept pacing, Cassy and Anna kept shaking, and the whole day seemed to drone on for what ...

3The sun broke through the small square shaped hole in the wall, which looked as though it had been a poor attempt by the residents previously to create a window. ...

WHAT IF LUKE SKYWALKER HAD GIVEN IN TO THE DARK SIDE AND OBEYED THE EMPEROR’S COMMANDS?“Take your father’s place and become my apprentice!”The words echoed around Luke’s head as he ...

The heap of metal parts and sparking wires poking out from the disembodied droids was enough to end Luke’s life there and then. C3PO’s golden head was slashed in half ...