oh, okay. Sorry, I'm not aware of how English people spell everything. =] Okay, that's fine if you're explaining it later. =]
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The new planet
Standing on the top of the hill, I smiled as I stared at the beautiful scene ahead of me. Trees, tall and green, coated in a thick layer of slippery moss. How did I know it was slippery? A monkey had just fallen off… but you don’t want to hear me tell you about a monkey slipping off a tree branch do you?
The sky was purple, a deep rich purple, and stars sparkling high in the sky. Forest canopies covered the whole of the planets floor; I could see nothing but green, pink, red and blue leaves. I could smell wet grass, rich and soothing, and I could smell familiar plants… something like a rose, rich and powerful though. They were almost unbearable to sniff. The not-roses were probably a hundred metres away. The sounds of birds chirping in the sky, of planes whizzing past, and of many creatures I couldn’t identify in the forest ahead could be heard. Birds and planes flew by in the strange sky; if they could manage to get me onto this planet and a few practice planes I had launched via signal, they would be able to send other animals and people and loads more onto this planet.
I was billions of miles away from my home, billions of years away from my home… I had been teleported onto the planet. The reason? There were too many humans on Earth; there was simply no room. Humans would be sent to the planet to live, give birth, eat, build and just simply live the life we once had on Earth.
The government of England, and every other government in the whole wide world had got together and chose me for this strange mission. I don’t really know why me of all people. Maybe their intention will be explained. They’d read my report and my background, what I do, and where I work. They’d said I was just the person for this mission, even if there were a million people with the same abilities as me… they said I was right for the job, I don’t know why; maybe because I’m 17 and have accomplished so much in so little time. I had studied all sciences and engineering techniques for about 7 years… Yes, I was young when I had started. But that was because I had a dream. I might have been teased for being a girl, but who cares? Of course, they teleported a monkey to the planet before teleporting me…
It seems strange, but the scientists had basically sent off a satellite, which would plant itself on the first planet in the universe it could sense with human living conditions. And they made sure it wouldn’t come back to Earth… It took about a week.
This planet was perfect.
I was given the opportunity to name it as well… it’d have to be approved by the Governments on Earth though, an easy way of contacting them was via signal, I could send texts on my mobile, but I needed to stand next to a signal which I had planted. Scientists had told me to plant five signals in an area where humans could definitely live, make sure there were no dangerous animals nearby and shoot them if they were in fact dangerous. I had done exactly that. Except for the shooting part, there weren’t any animals to kill.
I wasn’t going to provoke nature… never. I sat my but down on a soft rock and gazed at my mobile phone in my hand. That’s when an idea came to me. I wouldn’t cause agony for the animals on the planet, nor provoke them… The perfect name for the planet was most definitely Evony.
Finally my mind was made up after hours of thinking of a name, I had chosen. It was time to text to bring news of my success. Just as I started to create a new message, I felt a strange vibration beneath my feet. Glancing around me, I stood and frowned.
‘Please no,’ I whispered. ‘So far so good.’
That’s when a pair of vicious yellow eyes and blood stained teeth appeared from behind a bush. What the hell?! As I considered running, I realised a hesitation wasn’t what was needed, I needed my gun. Fiddling for my gun strapped into my harness, I pulled it out and held it high above my shoulders, ready for this strange unseen creature to attack.
The unfamiliar slowly exposed it’s ugly self from the shadows and into the light of the sun. It’s eyes were a demonic golden colour, observing my structure and features. I shivered as I glanced at his skull, leathery black with sharp, fatal spikes protruding from the scalp. In a deep lung full of air to stop me fainting, I scanned the creature once more, taking in its wide mouth as he bared his lethal fangs. One pierce and that would have definitely stopped me in my tracks, but I ignored all possibilities of a painful death and examined him more. He had four sharp furry claws with long nails covered in blood, a lengthy black fluffy tail, and a stretched belly. He was hideous.
The alien also stank bad, impossible to explain… but terribly off-putting. If I had touched him, he’d feel greasy and probably sticky. Maybe it was a way of making sure his victim would stick to him when he was chasing for his dinner.
I shuddered at the thought. Even with my gun held high, and my vegetarian way of going about things, I felt numb to the bone, and like I couldn’t shoot this animal, even if it was deadly. It was like if you hated someone, you wouldn’t leave him or her if they were dying, you’d call an ambulance right? But then again… some people only thought about themselves… or couldn’t care less.
Life isn’t fair if you think about it that way, I thought, and slowly, I put my finger on the trigger, took in a deep breath, and shot.
I heard a scream, an ear-piercing shriek, and then I fell back into unconsciousness.
***
My head felt heavy as I arrived into consciousness, I felt dazed and disorientated, like I’d woken up from an incredibly long dream. What had just happened? Where was I? Something was carrying me. What? I was being held in two arms… a human? No… not possible. It couldn’t be a human. Could it? I frowned in confusion as I thought about philosophy. Of course there was going to be more life in the universe, I’d just experienced that! How could a human be carrying me?
Confused!
Don’t think about this anymore! Just sleep! I thought to myself as I agreed with a part of my mind to leave it there. But could I? No I couldn’t! What if I was going to be eaten?
That was it. I snapped open my eyes and glanced up to see a human like person carrying me, cradling me in his arms. Was it a he? My vision was too messed up to become focused… perhaps it was… considering the structure of his face through blurred vision, I felt sure it was a he. I coughed slightly, just a cough to get his attention.
He didn’t look at me.
No surprise there. Who’d want to look at me? I was nothing special. I was just another living thing, meaning nothing in the universe.
‘Hello?’ I croaked.
The alien stopped.
The sudden stop scared me, made me wonder if now I had talked, he was going to eat me.
My vision cleared and I widened my eyes as I stared into his face. He looked… human! With the only exception being his nose was shaped like the muzzle of a dog, but the rest of him was pretty human… Oh no… had I stepped onto a planet of werewolves? Had the thing I shot been a werewolf?
‘Sang ur demer le forg,’ he said slowly. Had he just spoken in some strange werewolf tongue? Alien tongue?
He glanced into my eyes and I shied away from his glare, and looked to where he was heading before he had so abruptly stopped. A forest was ahead, and a path was leading into it. The forest was just a thick seemingly-never-ending bush of green, red, blue, orange and other obtuse colours. How odd could this world get? For a moment when he looked into my eyes, and I stared back into his big brown ones, I’d felt my heart melt, and I knew I shouldn’t feel any affection for an alien breed who might possibly eat me. That was just so god darn stupid.
I’d had time to glance at his features, pale skin, brown muzzle, black brushed back hair and pointy ears, and from what I’d seen of his shoulders, I was sure he wasn’t wearing any clothes.
I was going to have to find a better spot for a camp… I’d have to obtain the signals I had planted, but before I did that, I’d have to get the hell away from these aliens!
oh, okay. Sorry, I'm not aware of how English people spell everything. =] Okay, that's fine if you're explaining it later. =]
-Narniafreak!
Do you mean “meters”?
Hi! I'm Narniafreak! I hope all my comments help.
How did I know it was slippery? A monkey had just fallen off… but you don’t want to hear me tell you about a monkey slipping off a tree branch do you?
The sky was purple, a deep rich purple, and stars sparkling high in the sky.
Forest canopies covered the whole of the planets floor; I could see nothing but green, pink, red and blue leaves
The not-roses were probably a hundred metres away
The sounds of birds chirping in the sky, of planes whizzing past, and of many creatures I couldn’t identify in the forest ahead could be heard. Birds and planes flew by in the strange sky;
I was billions of miles away from my home, billions of years away from my home
and every other government in the whole wide world had got together
I was given the opportunity to name it as well… it’d have to be approved by the Governments on Earth though, an easy way of contacting them was via signal, I could send texts on my mobile, but I needed to stand next to a signal which I had planted
I sat my but down on a soft rock and gazed at my mobile phone in my hand.
The perfect name for the planet was most definitely Evony.
What the hell?! As I considered running, I realised a hesitation wasn’t what was needed, I needed my
The unfamiliar slowly exposed it’s ugly self from the
The alien also stank bad, impossible to explain… but terribly off-putting
I heard a scream, an ear-piercing shriek, and then I fell back into unconsciousness.
Don’t think about this anymore! Just sleep! I thought to myself as I agreed with a part of my mind to leave it there. But could I? No I couldn’t! What if I was going to be eaten?
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