since you all wanted me to change it, then I have:
I touch his soft red rosy lips,
Trace the pattern with my finger tips,
He grins at me and strokes my cheek,
All handsome kind and completely sleek,
His eyes are a pool of crystal blue,
But then he begins to eye me too,
My heart is thudding in my chest,
His eyes looking south, east, and west,
I feel all sticky, sweaty and mad,
Cause I can't stand the fact that he's a lad,
My heart stops working as he kisses me sweetly,
Then carries on as he lets me go neatly.
I am very proud of this poem! tell me what you think of it!
Edit: Changed it as you see. I am from up north in britain, so I don't know if you say lad for a boy anywhere else but that is what we say, and plus, I am a kid who has written it, so before you say it seems childish, consider the facts. But other than that! I hope you like it!
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