Morrigan

Hi there, reowine. I like many of the images you use here. They're very vivid. You've got a knack for that. There are a few things that confuse me, and ...

Hi there. This is pretty good. I like that you keep focused on the idea of stepping stones and likened it to something else. Nice job. The world had revolved ...

Good morning, Sunshine! (I couldn't resist. Sorry.) I really like all the images you've got going here. They're really lovely, and it leaves a mysterious feeling in the mind. I ...

Hi there! Unfortunately, the speakers on my laptop are broken. So I am unable to listen to your performance while reading the words. However, it looks like dogs gave you ...

Hi there, SpanishFlower. You've left a few reviews on my works, so I decided to check out some of your stuff! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good ...

Hi there, niteowl. I keep running into your poems! You have an interesting little scene here. It's certainly something to think about. I think one difficulty I'm having with this ...

Hi there. The last line made me chuckle. Truth is the true master of comedy, and you capture that in that line. That being said, there are some issues with ...

Hi there, Auxiira. Ah, a poem about writing. The subject has been written about before, and that makes it very difficult to successfully write a poem about writing. You have ...

Hi there! I like your idea, and the second half of your piece is lovely. Absolutely lovely. The chemicals idea is great. There are some things I'd like to address ...

Hi, niteowl. I really like this, and the last line sent chills down my spine. I love the reinvention of a story that seems like it's been done over and ...

Hi there, niteowl. This is lovely. It gave me shivers. This will probably be a short review (that's a good thing, trust me). i'm the last choice of those who ...

Hi there, Kay. I like the imagery here. I also love cats. The words you use in the first stanza really do well to illustrate what's going on. However, there ...

Hi there, Kay. It's very difficult to write a piece like this. It's hard to obtain an objective perspective on oneself because we are never outside of ourselves and our ...

Hi there, dewdrop. I like your idea of being trapped inside your own head. I also like that you put imagery into your poem. Your rhythm is going to need ...

Hi there, Kafka. Your images are intimidatingly good. I really love this. The way you formatted it makes me thing of "Howl" by Allen Ginsberg. It's not quite the same, ...