Morrigan

Hi there, Spark. Holy cow. Wow. This was lovely. I have no idea about this Poetree game you speak of, but I'm going to review this poem just like any ...

Hi there. I really like the idea of a person being a piece of paper that just keeps getting folded and unfolded so different color appear. Great ideas. Your execution, ...

Hi there, dasiamari. I like your ideas and the way you frame your piece. It has a nice feel to it. It feels sharp, like the way I would feel ...

Hi there, dianneece. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. First, the ideas are very relatable, and I haven't seen many poems with this subject. That being ...

Hi there, Panther. I like the ideas you're trying to convey here. They're interesting, and I think this is a good start. That being said, I do think this needs ...

Hi there, Indie. I like your ideas, and the way you illustrate them. The ending is nice, too. That being said, I think this needs a little polishing. Honestly, I'm ...

Hi there, prim, and welcome to YWS! This is quite good. I really like what you did here with all of your images and ideas. Nice work. I'm going to ...

Hi there, tarameagan. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. First of all, you should format this like poetry. You need to break it into lines so ...

Hey there, Teeth. This is really quite good. I really enjoyed reading it. Are you really just fourteen? Because you've got talent beyond your years. Okay, this is kind of ...

Hi there. Since you messaged me, here I am. Your ideas are wonderful. You have the beginnings of very good imagery here. However, it is rough. It is salvageable, though. ...

Ahoy, Cole. I'm one of the judges for dogs' short story contest, and I've stopped by to give you a review. First of all, I really enjoyed reading this. It ...

Ahoy there! I'm here to review for dogs' contest! First of all, I think you did quite a good job incorporating your prompts into the story. Had I not read ...

Hey there, ghostie. I really enjoyed reading this. It's a little different than a lot of short stories, but it was good, and I liked it. Honestly, it read more ...

Hi there, aeresky. Welcome to YWS! It's great to see new faces. I really like this poem. You put your images in well, and they do what they're supposed to ...

Hi there wherethewindgoes. Whoa. The images. Wow. I'm blown away. I love it so much. You don't know. Gosh. I'm so jealous of your poetic ability. This stanza in particular ...