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Re: First Snow of the Year
Hello, ma'am! I'm here for the poetry exchange thingamabob! First of all, I really like the whole idea of the poem. I remember when I actually liked the snow and ...
Feb 19, 2014 -
Re: Brothers and Sister
Hello! Magpie here to review! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I see that this is about family, and how it should stand together. Honestly, it ...
Feb 13, 2014 -
Re: Today we say goodbye
Hello there, GreenTulip. It's Magpie here to review! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I like the idea of this poem. It's nice, but at the ...
Feb 6, 2014 -
Re: Imprism me
Wow! I am blown away. I'm so glad that you have a grasp of imagery! Imagery is my favorite aspect of poetry, and can really create a memorable poem. I ...
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: Nobody Sees
Hello! Magpie here to review! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. First, make sure you make an author's note in the body of the piece that ...
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: Rusted Hearts
Hi there, AE! I decided to review this because I see that you're out and about reviewing lots of people's things and giving them really good advice. ^_^ I really ...
Feb 3, 2014 -
Re: Jazz Band
Hi there! Magpie here to review! Here's my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I was hooked by the title. I love jazz bands, and there are so many ...
Feb 3, 2014 -
Re: For my Dear Mommy
Hi there! Ooh, Supernatural! And out of the two, Dean is definitely the hot one. Here is my opinion. It's filled with good intentions. When writing fanfiction, it is important ...
Feb 3, 2014 -
Re: Wasted, Broken, Gone
Hi there! Magpie here for a quick review! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. Is this a breakup poem? I don't know. And that is a ...
Feb 2, 2014 -
Re: Is It a Dream? Chapter 4 Meeting the king
Hello there! I'm here to review! You have a good start and ending of this chapter. The starting point grabs my attention. The last point doesn't make me itch for ...
Feb 2, 2014 -
Re: Payday
Hi, Carbon! This is great! It's one of the best works I've read on this site recently. I love the story, its ambiguity, the oppressive air. It's fabulous. It's so ...
Feb 2, 2014 -
Re: Waterfall - Page 1 Part 2
Hi there, Katiekatt! I'm here to rescue you from the Green Room! I like your ideas, and this could be a nice start to a novel. I like that the ...
Feb 1, 2014 -
Re: Maybe and What?
Hello! I'm here to rescue you from the Green Room! I think the ideas within the poem are very easy to connect to. I've certainly felt this way before. A ...
Jan 31, 2014 -
Re: Coffee at Midnight
Hello there! I've come to review (this work out of all of yours had the least reviews)! I like the warm feeling this poem gives me. You have a cohesive ...
Jan 30, 2014 -
Re: Happy wounds (rough draft)
Hello, Monsters! I'm here to review! Wow! I really like this! Your imagery is vivid, and you definitely get your point across. It's quite lovely. That being said, there are ...
Jan 30, 2014
