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Re: Sunrise and Sunset on an Empty Canvas
Hi there, Em! What drew me to this was the title. It sounded really interesting, and I think you've got a nice subject here. I really like your ideas and ...
May 6, 2014 -
Re: A Haiku
Hello, RachelLeeAnn! While this is technically a Haiku because of the syllable count, generally, Haiku connect two unlike ideas to form a single idea. Traditionally, nature is incorporated into haiku,
May 6, 2014 -
Re: Play Rough
Hello, Savvy. All right. So here we have a game of indeterminate nature (soccer, perhaps?), and someone who is pushing you to finish the game even though you're not as ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: What would we truly be?
Hi there, GreenTulip! Here is my honest opinon. It's filled with good intentions. I don't know if I would call this a poem as much as a bunch of statements ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: Magpie
Oh, you gave me shivers. I was directed to this poem because the poem and I share a name. I'm glad I was directed here. This is beautiful. My mouth ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: Where I am From
Hi there! Welcome to Young Writers Society! I think you've got a good start here. I really like your images! But as you noticed, I said you have a good ...
May 2, 2014 -
Re: He is Love
Hello there! Welcome to YWS! It's nice to meet you. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. This isn't a poem as much as it is a ...
Apr 29, 2014 -
Re: .
Hello there, WindSailor! While I don't agree with everything you said in your essay, I would like to give you some helpful essay tips. 1. When writing an article/essay, be ...
Apr 23, 2014 -
Re: Hello and Goodbye
Hello there. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. Apart from being very vague and confusing, as Iggy mentioned, I found this cliche. A broken heart is ...
Apr 23, 2014 -
Re: Myasthenia Gravis
Hey, Aley, I'm here to review, as requested. This is certainly a powerful story. I am glad that your mother is doing all right, and I'm glad that you took ...
Apr 23, 2014 -
Re: Life Counts
Hi there! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. At first glance, this is good. It brings out emotion. It's swirling and intense. I don't know if ...
Apr 22, 2014 -
Re: Better a virgin
Hello there! I'm returning the favor of the review! First of all, poems should always be single spaced. With the software on this website, you have to hold shift when ...
Apr 22, 2014 -
Re: I'm fine, why do you ask?
Hi there! This was fabulous. I haven't read something with such excitement for a long time. I forgot what reading something truly interesting and good could be like. There were ...
Apr 22, 2014 -
Re: Project: Dead Anna (Chapter One)
Hi there! I was very worried about the content of this when I saw the title and description. "Project: Dead Anna" and "A novel I wrote about suicide" coupled with ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: It's raining cats, dogs and fairies
Hi there! I'm here to save your work from the Green Room! So this was cute. That's really the only word for it. It was light, and... well, cute. I ...
Apr 17, 2014
