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Morrigan

Morrigan

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Sunrise and Sunset on an Empty Canvas

    Hi there, Em! What drew me to this was the title. It sounded really interesting, and I think you've got a nice subject here. I really like your ideas and ...

    May 6, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: A Haiku

    Hello, RachelLeeAnn! While this is technically a Haiku because of the syllable count, generally, Haiku connect two unlike ideas to form a single idea. Traditionally, nature is incorporated into haiku,

    May 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Play Rough

    Hello, Savvy. All right. So here we have a game of indeterminate nature (soccer, perhaps?), and someone who is pushing you to finish the game even though you're not as ...

    May 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: What would we truly be?

    Hi there, GreenTulip! Here is my honest opinon. It's filled with good intentions. I don't know if I would call this a poem as much as a bunch of statements ...

    May 5, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Magpie

    Oh, you gave me shivers. I was directed to this poem because the poem and I share a name. I'm glad I was directed here. This is beautiful. My mouth ...

    May 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Where I am From

    Hi there! Welcome to Young Writers Society! I think you've got a good start here. I really like your images! But as you noticed, I said you have a good ...

    May 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: He is Love

    Hello there! Welcome to YWS! It's nice to meet you. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. This isn't a poem as much as it is a ...

    Apr 29, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Realistic Re: .

    Hello there, WindSailor! While I don't agree with everything you said in your essay, I would like to give you some helpful essay tips. 1. When writing an article/essay, be ...

    Apr 23, 2014
  • Other » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Hello and Goodbye

    Hello there. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. Apart from being very vague and confusing, as Iggy mentioned, I found this cliche. A broken heart is ...

    Apr 23, 2014
  • Other » Health, Narrative Re: Myasthenia Gravis

    Hey, Aley, I'm here to review, as requested. This is certainly a powerful story. I am glad that your mother is doing all right, and I'm glad that you took ...

    Apr 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Life Counts

    Hi there! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. At first glance, this is good. It brings out emotion. It's swirling and intense. I don't know if ...

    Apr 22, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Better a virgin

    Hello there! I'm returning the favor of the review! First of all, poems should always be single spaced. With the software on this website, you have to hold shift when ...

    Apr 22, 2014
  • Short Story » Literature, Realistic Re: I'm fine, why do you ask?

    Hi there! This was fabulous. I haven't read something with such excitement for a long time. I forgot what reading something truly interesting and good could be like. There were ...

    Apr 22, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Humor Re: Project: Dead Anna (Chapter One)

    Hi there! I was very worried about the content of this when I saw the title and description. "Project: Dead Anna" and "A novel I wrote about suicide" coupled with ...

    Apr 17, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: It's raining cats, dogs and fairies

    Hi there! I'm here to save your work from the Green Room! So this was cute. That's really the only word for it. It was light, and... well, cute. I ...

    Apr 17, 2014


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