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Re: Cruise
Hello Katteex, I'm Morrigan, and I'm here to review your poem. The best thing about your poem is how focused you are on your motif. The focus on the image ...
Apr 25, 2020 -
Re: "Morning Person"
Hello InconspicuoslyAlpacaing! This is Morrigan dropping in for a review. I dig this, man. It's definitely not something that is going to deeply affect me, but it's lighthearted. I've had ...
Apr 22, 2020 -
Re: 'you-rid-ih-see'
Son, this is a lot to dissect. Every time I read your poetry now, I find myself googling something or other. Today I was googling who these people are. What ...
Apr 16, 2020 -
Re: Lament
Hey, I'm Morrigan, dropping in for a review. It's been a while. There's been a lot of praise for this poem already, and I can see why. It's tranquil; it's ...
Apr 16, 2020 -
Re: a semester's weight
Hi Jaybird, I’m a little rusty at reviewing, but I thought I’d lend you my thoughts. This poem definitely represents me at one time in my life. I remember the ...
Feb 5, 2020 -
Re: i think i wrote poetry once
Hi Alliyah, I'm here to review your poem! All right, so we have a short poem here. I dig it. I dig the length and the focus. Not every poem ...
Jun 29, 2019 -
Re: Inception
Hey Cas, I'm here to leave you a review. All right, let's jump in, shall we? I like the concept of the two truths and a lie, though I'm a ...
Jun 21, 2019 -
Re: Nothing kills a man faster than his own head
Hey there silvermoon17! I'm here to review your poem, as I promised. Sorry it took me so long! I've been pretty busy this past week! So I really dig some ...
Jun 19, 2019 -
Re: I'm a Writer-Poem about loving your passion more then yourself
Heyo ToxicAnglerFish, I'm Morrigan, here to return the favor of leaving a few thoughts on your piece! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. This poem is ...
Jun 12, 2019 -
Re: radio silence: a love story
Hello paperforest, my dude. You've got me with chicken skin arms and tears in my eyes. This is a gut-punch of a poem if I've ever read one. You use ...
Jun 7, 2019 -
Re: The Throne I Chose
Hi there teamwsmf, Morri here to review your poem. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. Let's start with the beginning. Everything you say in the first ...
Jun 3, 2019 -
Re: disruption
Heyo Pernicus, I'm Morri and I'm here to review your poem! So your imagery is there. It's concrete and I feel it and you're good there. Lovely word choice, brought ...
May 31, 2019 -
Re: A little rambling
Hi CorvusQueen, how ya doin'? Morrigan here to review your poem. This is super cute! I must say, I'm partial to a rambling little poem myself. I produce too many ...
May 31, 2019 -
Re: i n c a s e w e d o n t e x i s t
Ahoy there, Storybrainiac! I've come to review your poem! I really like some of the imagery you've got going here. It's surreal and really drives home the point of the ...
May 30, 2019 -
Re: Curious Female
Hello there, F0xTr0t! Welcome to YWS! I'm here to talk to you about the importance of meter. You've got a rhyme scheme going here, but rhyme scheme is nothing without ...
May 29, 2019
