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Re: Defining Anything
Hello again, DragonLily. I really enjoyed this. I don't know if I find it humorous, but I really liked the ride that you took your readers on. I'm not sure ...
Mar 28, 2015 -
Re: Reality
Hello, DragonLily. I think that most of the juxtapositions are nicely done, but there is a big flaw that I can see. This poem doesn't really go anywhere. It doesn't ...
Mar 28, 2015 -
Re: Time
Hello, QueenofWords! I really enjoy this. You incorporate so many things. Nice things. I love the form, first of all. The hourglass shape conveys time in its very essence, physically. ...
Mar 28, 2015 -
Re: Sick and Tired
Hello there, ulala8. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. First of all, I agree completely with all of the points you've raised. As an egalitarian feminist, ...
Mar 28, 2015 -
Re: A Sonnet for Satan.
Hi there, godlypopo. First of all, I love the subject. Not many people would think about writing a sonnet for Satan. It reminded me of something I once heard, that ...
Mar 28, 2015 -
Re: Hidden behind the drapes
Hello there! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I'm unsure what this poem is about. Snipers looking for a kid? Why would they be looking for ...
Mar 28, 2015 -
Re: The Naive tree
Hello, there. This reminds me a lot of "The Giving Tree" by Shel Silverstein, with a less charming ending. I feel like it's been kind of done before, and while ...
Mar 28, 2015 -
Re: Opposing forces
Hello, Falconer. Love the avvi. I think this is an interesting subject that you have chosen to write about. I haven't really seen this subject talked about very much. I ...
Mar 28, 2015 -
Re: From a Trees Perspective
Hello there! To be honest, I feel like "from the perspective of a tree" has been done before quite a bit. Trees are a very prominent plant, and people take ...
Mar 28, 2015 -
Re: To See the Sea
Hello there, siddys97. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I don't really feel that this poem has brought anything new to the table on the topic ...
Mar 28, 2015 -
Re: The Most Dramatic of Exits
Hello, wewinwelose, I enjoyed this, but I don't know if I should have. The description is very grim, but I don't really feel that in the poem until the last ...
Mar 28, 2015 -
Re: The Deer King
Hello! I quite enjoyed reading this. Your imagery is quite nice, and I appreciate your message and how you illustrated it through nature. That being said, there are a few ...
Mar 28, 2015 -
Re: moby celeste
Hello, Firestarter. I have been meaning to review this for a while because it's just lovely and haunting, and it's haunted me since I've read it. And now, this is ...
Mar 26, 2015 -
Re: Props and Mayhem (A Fanfic)
Hello, TheBrokenAngel, Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. First of all, this is categorized under "art." This should be categorized under "Novel", and you're going to ...
Mar 26, 2015 -
Re: L’labtoof
Hi there! This was a cute and funny way to describe football. I thought it was nice that instead of simply spelling everything backwards, you also took time to add ...
Mar 26, 2015
