Morrigan

Hey, Autopilot. A late welcome to YWS! I hope you stick around. The title didn't bother me as much as the previous reviewer because it defines the kind of sleep ...

Hey, man, I'm here to review your poem. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. The title says it all, and really, that's not a good thing. ...

Hey Wolfie~ I like this, but there's something about it that needs a little more. Let's begin with the things that work. I like the ending a lot (though I'd ...

Heyo Strange. This review's going to get me my next star. Wheeeeee So I found out what this was about because of the comment below. While poetry should usually stand ...

Hello, InfiniteRectangles. This is cute. Cute because of the shape, which is the main point of the poem, I believe. I don't have very much time, but I'd like to ...

Hellooooo~ You have a lot of reviews on this already, but why not one more? This poem is V shaped. Not physically, but in ideology. You start with something that ...

Hi! I don't really know what to think of this. It's cute, and I'm glad that I read the description that said you wrote it in sixth grade. If you ...

Hello. This is a nice little descriptive piece. However, I feel like it could be improved upon. I do like how it's very simple and doesn't say that he's been ...

Hello, babydollblues! I really, really like this, and I think it's quite effective. However, I think that you could make it even more effective. Let me look at it with ...

Hello. I like the images you use in this poem. It's kind of abstract and just lets my mind wander. That being said, there are a few things that could ...

Hello. I'm sure your mom will love this poem. Moms love it when you write them poems. However, since you're posting it on YWS, it means that you're open to ...

I dig your jams, man. Each stanza is a thought. Not really a complete thought, I feel like, but more than complete? Like when you're thinking about one thing and ...

Strangelove, let's dance. I read your comment on another review and I just want to let you know that my heart goes out to you. I don't know how well ...

Hello, MsPoetry~ A slightly late welcome to YWS to you! I appreciate your use of a natural motif in this poem to represent inner feelings. That being said, I feel ...

Hello, Slash. Welcome to YWS! It takes a lot of courage to post on your first day here. Unfortunately, it is very difficult to understand some parts of your poem. ...