Morrigan

Hello, EverWinter! I'm here to review your poem this fine review day! I enjoy the use of nature motif to express inward emotions. Whenever people write about hiding emotions or ...

Hello, Monsters! Here for review day! I can see that you're getting at something here. To be honest, though, I'm not quite sure what it is. You start out with ...

Hello! I've come to review your story today! I like how you created this dreamlike scene. For one, I believe it is a dream because of several things. 1) There ...

Hello beautiful fortis! I totally have some wine in my system but I will review this beautiful poem to the best of my ability. I'm more honest with wine. It's ...

You said shred, so here I am! I understand this feeling of someone always getting there before you, especially figuratively. It's a nice feeling to write a poem about because ...

Hey, Jules~ I really enjoyed this. I don't know what I was expecting when I saw that it was a science fiction poem, but I wasn't expecting a farewell like ...

Hello beautiful person~ I really love the conversational tone that you carry throughout all of your works. It sounds like you're speaking to someone, weaving a beautiful verbal tapestry that ...

Heyo, Lightsong. I feel the passion in this. I feel that you sat down to write this and it all poured out. I think that's great. I love writing poetry ...

Hello, Squirrel, I'm here to review your poem. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. What does this poem do? While it is the description of a ...

Hello, tigerlilly. If I'm being honest, which I am, I felt the same way about this when I was your age. Because I didn't understand. I hope you understand what ...

Heyo, whitewolf, I'm here to review your poem. Welcome to YWS, by the way. It's nice to see new faces around. All right so what we've got here is a ...

Whee! This is awesome~ I told you that I'd review it! So the strongest point of your poem is that you characterized the 12 months so well. I was able ...

This is late, but late is better than never, right? This is intense. It's words that you as the poet obviously delights in (shutters shuttered shutting shutted) all woven into ...

Hello, jpwriter. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. Honestly, this feels jumbled. There's a message here, but there is so much unneeded fluff that doesn't really ...

Hey there, cpedro. Hey, I'm almost as old as you! We oldies gotta stick together! I usually don't like how rhyming poetry goes, but you have some nice images and ...