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  • Poetry » General, General Re: want

    I'm here! Let's begin. On my first reasthrough, I was spellbound by swirling, beautiful, confusing imagery. This poem is meant to be savored and read slowly, so I knew that ...

    Apr 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: His Last Words

    Hello, SarinaThomas~ I'm here to review your piece today. My condolences on the loss of your friend. These things are extremely difficult to deal with, and you have my sympathy. ...

    Apr 12, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Context

    Oh, this is so nice. I really like this. Your plain language whipped into a sestina is lovely and raw at the same time. I appreciate your use of internal ...

    Apr 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: If

    Hello, keepwriting! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. While this piece looks like a poem, and even has an end rhyme, does that make this a ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: if i jumped off a cliff you would do it too

    Ok but I don't want to like this, but I think it's actually quite well executed. I don't want to like it because generally I don't like very pointy commentary ...

    Mar 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Unbroken

    Hello, Ivywater! I've come to review your piece today! (Please excuse any typos-- I'm on my phone) I really like the spirit behind this, and it comes through in its ...

    Mar 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Clocks

    Hello! I also feel the anxiety when I stare at a clock. Time passing is something out of everyone's control and I think that many people can relate to this. ...

    Feb 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: love and war, love is war

    Hello, cheaperpoetry! First things first, I think you've got a consistent formatting issue going on with something in your device because the first word of every line is on its ...

    Feb 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: There is silence, Silence apart

    Hello, FeatherPen! I like all the images that you've included here. You've really painted us a picture of the narrator trying to go to sleep but being disturbed by all ...

    Feb 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: Not Made To Satisfy

    Heyo~ Ok so what we've got here is great imagery and things that sound so beautiful and poetic that my heart is breaking a little. Also I have no idea ...

    Feb 28, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Collage

    Hello Yams, I'm back to review as promised. I'm digging what you've got going here. You've got some nice imagery. There are a few things that I'd like to address, ...

    Feb 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Self shaming

    Hello, Catlover211! I think it's important to express our feelings about ourselves, even if they are negative. I have written this type of poem in the past, and it is ...

    Feb 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: A place between several seas

    Hello, Pompiepoo, here to review you! So I read the review Monsters left you, and I agree with all of it. So if you're looking for a second opinion about ...

    Feb 28, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Some Days...

    Hello! I'm here to review your poem on this lovely review day! I understand the feeling that you're trying to convey through this poem. The emotion really comes through the ...

    Feb 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: A SAGA of sterotypes

    Hello, ChocolateCello! (hey, that rhymed!) I like the motive you have behind this poem. It's fun and it gets its point across well. Clever title, too! I do think that ...

    Feb 28, 2016


You know what the big problem is in telling fantasy and reality apart? They're both ridiculous.
— The 12th Doctor