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Re: want
I'm here! Let's begin. On my first reasthrough, I was spellbound by swirling, beautiful, confusing imagery. This poem is meant to be savored and read slowly, so I knew that ...
Apr 15, 2016 -
Re: His Last Words
Hello, SarinaThomas~ I'm here to review your piece today. My condolences on the loss of your friend. These things are extremely difficult to deal with, and you have my sympathy. ...
Apr 12, 2016 -
Re: Context
Oh, this is so nice. I really like this. Your plain language whipped into a sestina is lovely and raw at the same time. I appreciate your use of internal ...
Apr 11, 2016 -
Re: If
Hello, keepwriting! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. While this piece looks like a poem, and even has an end rhyme, does that make this a ...
Apr 9, 2016 -
Re: if i jumped off a cliff you would do it too
Ok but I don't want to like this, but I think it's actually quite well executed. I don't want to like it because generally I don't like very pointy commentary ...
Mar 31, 2016 -
Re: Unbroken
Hello, Ivywater! I've come to review your piece today! (Please excuse any typos-- I'm on my phone) I really like the spirit behind this, and it comes through in its ...
Mar 30, 2016 -
Re: Clocks
Hello! I also feel the anxiety when I stare at a clock. Time passing is something out of everyone's control and I think that many people can relate to this. ...
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: love and war, love is war
Hello, cheaperpoetry! First things first, I think you've got a consistent formatting issue going on with something in your device because the first word of every line is on its ...
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: There is silence, Silence apart
Hello, FeatherPen! I like all the images that you've included here. You've really painted us a picture of the narrator trying to go to sleep but being disturbed by all ...
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: Not Made To Satisfy
Heyo~ Ok so what we've got here is great imagery and things that sound so beautiful and poetic that my heart is breaking a little. Also I have no idea ...
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: Collage
Hello Yams, I'm back to review as promised. I'm digging what you've got going here. You've got some nice imagery. There are a few things that I'd like to address, ...
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: Self shaming
Hello, Catlover211! I think it's important to express our feelings about ourselves, even if they are negative. I have written this type of poem in the past, and it is ...
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: A place between several seas
Hello, Pompiepoo, here to review you! So I read the review Monsters left you, and I agree with all of it. So if you're looking for a second opinion about ...
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: Some Days...
Hello! I'm here to review your poem on this lovely review day! I understand the feeling that you're trying to convey through this poem. The emotion really comes through the ...
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: A SAGA of sterotypes
Hello, ChocolateCello! (hey, that rhymed!) I like the motive you have behind this poem. It's fun and it gets its point across well. Clever title, too! I do think that ...
Feb 28, 2016
