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Re: You And The World That Holds You
Hello, MemroyHunter! It's review day! First of all, I think you've got some really nice images that all go along nicely with a nature motif. That's definitely the strongest part ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: Road Trip
Hello, herbgirl! It's review day! I'm here to review your cute little poem. I chuckled when I read this. I really enjoyed the humor that you implemented here. Your meter ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: 2 Your Demographic
Interesting. As all of your poems, I like this, but something about it is lacking. I feel like it's too "their fault" for my taste. I mean, poems like this ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: all that I am is starlight, dim
Hello, penfeme! It's review day! I think you've got a simple, solid concept that can work well for poetry. Freedom is a really nice theme to play on, and I ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: construction workers hate their jobs though building blocks are great toys for your child
Hello, KutieKoala! It's review day! I see that you responded to a review that you're not going to touch this because it can't be salvaged. Fair enough. I'm still going ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: they pillaged our homes; they left our pillars
Here to review, as requested! I think what you've got here is thoughts that are all intertwined and hard to separate, but also distinct sections that basically should be their ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: parting: repeat until further notice
YES I LOVE THIS It's delicate and heavy and standing on the edge of something greater than it really is. It's on the horizon, way out there. But it's so ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: Love Hurts.
Hello, Kayley01! It's nice to meet you on this lovely review day. I think you have some nice insights about love. You use imagery to back up your ideas about ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: Oblivious Heaven
Heyo~ I love your username. Great band. Let's dive in, shall we? I see from a response you left on a review below that this is about witch trials. That's ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: pinpricks of light in the wounds the needle gave me
Pomp
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: The Mean Spirited Leper Gives Me a Green Leather Jacket
Heyo Fox, I'm here to review your poem. Okay so this really reminds me of my earlier poetry. It's not bad, but it could use refining. The thing about this ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: Before a great big bomb destroys the Western Coast of the United States
As soon as I saw this title, I knew who had written it. Someone said this to me about one of my titles, and I asked them if I was ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: Translator
Hello, Vincent. It's review day! I took Spanish in high school. I got a D. It was all about Spanish grammar, though, and so I'm actually not horrible at understanding ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: Your Values
Hello, KingQueenKnave! It's review day. I'm not quite sure what this poem is trying to accomplish. Is this a general "you" addressing the population, or is it directed at a ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: stairway to bruises
Wow. I have shivers all over from reading this. My first read through, I didn't scroll all the way down until the end, and I was confused. So I had ...
Jul 22, 2016