MoonIris

Hi LadyGemstone, I'm here with a review. This is my favorite poem so far. I think you used vocabulary that put together made this it very emotional. I believe the ...

Hi Ladygemstone, I am here with a review. I liked your poem as much as I did with the others. It has a beautiful message and you put it in ...

Hi MomoandAppa, I'm here with a review. You've already received a pretty complete one so mine is going to be shorter. I personally really like sand and the see. Actually ...

Hi BlackThorne, Ițm here to review another one of your lovely chapters. I liked this chapter as much as I liked the past one. I like the action of it ...

Hi BlackThorne, I'm here with a review. I saw this chapter in the green room so I decided to read it. I was pleasantly surprised. I know how annoying it ...

Hi MIRACLE EVE ASIIMWE, I'm here with a review. I really liked this poem. I feel like kindness is very important and this is a nice little reminder. Horisun has ...

Hi EM8650, I'm here with a review. I liked the concept of your story. It's a very interesting one. The characters seem fun as well. The one major problem that ...

Hi Iloveharleyguinn03, I'm here with a review. It's quite short so my review will be the same. This is a very simple beginning where we know the characters and nothing ...

Hi Liminality, I'm here to review your poem. I really liked it. Birds are often used for metaphors about freedom but I think your approach is even more interesting. Not ...

Hi Tawsif, I'm here with a review. This is a beautiful short story. I almost cried reading this. I have a really strong relationship with my mother and I could ...

Hi R.R, I'm here with a review. I really, really like this chapter. The world-building is very interesting and you don't give to much information in one go. How much ...

Hi BIHXY, I'm here with a review. I think your poem is very nice. It explains how it is to go to the confession box at the church. I think ...

Hi Inaya705, I'm here with a review. I'm going to start with the first chapter. I really like the idea of the story and the characters that you've created. You ...

Hi Creativeusernane, I’m here with a review. I really liked your poem. To be cair I imagined this person literely freezing to death then I thought about it like a ...

Hi MomoandAppa, I'm here with a review. I was very sorry this morning when I heard about this superhero's death. I didn't find any grammar mistakes in this short poem. ...