MooCowPoop

Wow, this was really good! I love it because it's so descriptive (at least to me it is). I just love your play with words. :) The only thing I ...

Hello @Dreamy! I like this poem... or is it a song? Oh well, that does not matter, it was cool anyway! I thought it was pretty funny too. I especially ...

Hello New User (I assume). First off, welcome to YWS! Thanks for posting some of your work and congrats on getting in the spotlight! Now it's time for that juicy ...

MooCowPoop here to review your story! :) I am a bit confused as to how this all started, or what this is. Is this the only part to the story?If ...

Firstly, I love that name for a character. This idea sounds really awesome. However, I wonder what you are going to make Axel see... Perhaps the images he see could ...

I like this poem. I like how you made it like... depression was the death of the speaker, but not directly. This is how I feel sometimes when I am ...

That was hilarious. On the spot; I actually sang it along with the song on youtube. This should be YWS's anthem. It'd be great. Someone could sing this song to ...

That was a very nice poem, technically and content-wise. You've written something that people can relate to. Not only that, but it can be very difficult for writers to write ...

Wow, that's really bad that kids were doing that. So far this story seems really interesting. I'm guessing it is going to be about a couple of friends who got ...

At first I thought this story was going to be about a cowboy because I didn't read it closely enough. But then I realized that the guy was behind the ...

That was a nice poem. I liked it. But some of it I didn't understand. Like the second stanza. This part made it especially confusing: "Which power is the free ...

That was very lovely. It had a lot of squishy mushiness to it and it was very cute (I don't know what you think about me calling your poem cute ...

Wow, that was a really sad poem. I could feel really connect with the speaker's emotions. I can also see how you've made this poem a never-ending cycle of madness. ...

I think there could have been more added to this poem. These events you describe are things that are very important and meaningful to people. Aging is something everyone can ...

That was good. The speaker sounds like a woeful man who is distraught because the love of his life is making a wrong decision, according to him. The feelings he ...