Young Writers Society

Complete garbage. Christians need to pray for those who chose to have abortions, and more importantly, for those how preform them. This has nothing to do with Christianity and you ...

Hey Iggy, I thought to review you because you've come a long way in this poetry thing- but now, perhaps, I think you should work on clarity. Now usually, I ...

Hey Fizz, this is monsters. You gave alot of feedback for my poems and I thought I would return the favor. You told him how you Already uninterested. This is ...

This is pretty rough. It lacks any originally- the boy afraid of monsters under their bed is cliche. What you brought us here was a jumbled mess of the same ...

This is a review, take what you will out of it. The feeling of depression crawling across my skin, How would you say depression is felt to someone who hadn't ...

This is a review, choose to take what you will out of it. Okay you got a reason to write but it's literally the same to me as a generalized ...

This review is all opinion here obviously; you should choose to take and leave what you want to. The fragrance of Heaven grows sweeter to smell, As those loved so ...

Hey Kajka, I'm here for your review as requested. While this gets some emotion across the point that you could see the most improvement is twisting the cliches with an ...

Sorry spark, I've been preparing for exams the past few weeks. Spark I don't really agree with the way you went about writing this. There are too many details at ...

hello fortis, I was going to start on chapter 34 but that would have been a disastrous review. Another thing, I don't usually review short stories or novels because I ...

Whatever it is you did here is wonderful to my ears. It truly does sound like a violin to me and the emotion from that exceeds a majority of even ...

Hey, Gravity. I like that you cited your sources. Other then that you should take your time with a subject before you leave it. The subjects are not explained with ...

So sorry, but you should work on clarity. I know to you is it clear as a crystal but you need to make this clearer for everyone and start by ...

Pretty packages of patterned paper This type of alteration is forced because it is lingering on the packages instead of progressing the imagery or the story. Only superb writings can ...

Hey, its monsters. You have pretty a good foundation set up here, you have a good ability to think deeply about how things interact, and the ability to tie them ...