Monki

That's really awesome that you had the idea to write an Ode to Writers! I would've never thought of that. I mean, come on, it's an Ode to Writers! And ...

I must say that I agree with pegasi_quill. I'm not quite sure why you made this a poem... I think this is a good outline for a story of fiction; ...

All I can say is that I found nothing to critique. Really, I didn't. This was beautiful. I couldn't have done it better (or even this good) myself. Tell me, ...

Surprisingly, I'm the only person that agrees with Suzanne. ^ ^ I read this once, twice, three times over and I was like, "Hm... this doesn't sound like a poem, ...

((OOC: This is my first ever attempt at romantic fiction, so feel free to give pointers :D )) Ooh! Congrats on your first attempt at romantic fiction!!! That's basically the ...

The first thing I will say is, "Oh my gosh! This is the beginning of a really good book." This is the type of stuff that I like to read. ...

Lmao. Um... not really a big fan... That "o-o-o-o's", etc... are kind of... unnecessary. It would be much better and taken more seriously if you just wrote the word regularly. ...

All I can say is great plot. I'm really impressed by how you did this POV thing. I don't see many guys writing from a girls POV. Very, very well ...

Well, first, I'd like to say this is beyond the need of a critique. Not being mean, but this poem has no meaning. It would be better off if you ...

Hi, gothgirl. Umm... If you were hoping for a good critique, I'm afraid you're not going to like this one. If you were hoping for a bad critique, then enjoy! ...

Tonight the lights are dimmed;

Hmm... *contemplates what to say* First off, let me say this this really grabbed my attention. When I first started reading it, I was unsure of what it was about. ...

Critique for you : Go In memory of Isaac Wise It seems so long, But feels so close. What happened? Why'd you go? I miss you alot

Critique for you! : A light breeze ruffled a tall muscular girl's dirty blond hair. Small rain drops pelted the cement basketball court. The trees seemed unhappy and swayed stiffly ...

Interesting... Here's my critique : Chapter one ~ B lood L ies~ Anaya sat on the man, the corpse that once had been a live, until she ripped her teeth ...