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Hey there! I really liked this! Especially the twist ending! At first, I didn't like it so much, because it just seemed like a re-write of Cinderella, but the ending ...

Hey Melvin, I'm Mo. I liked it, I thought it was nice, and you got across the message that was intended. The poem held my attention well, and I think ...

Ooh, pretty! Hey Smiles! I like this, especially the rhyming pattern, I think it has a good rhythm. Good job, I really liked it, I think it's very well written! ...

I think this piece needs a bit of work, but I like it. You have made love confusing, bad and good. Although, if I hadn't read the title, I would ...

Hey! I'm Mo, and I'll be reviewing this for you! :D I thought this was good, and I think the last line really brings a certain element to this piece. ...

Hey Kat! I didn't think it sucked! I thought it was actually quite good. :D Although it did confuse me a bit, I like the brokenness of it, and the ...

Wow. I really liked this, I think it's really nice. It gives me a positive feeling, focusing on the good, and not the bad, learning from past mistakes. But it ...

Hey Forest! I really liked this, and I think it was well written. You made me curious, and very sympathetic towards the character. I think you really got the feeling ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! :D Wow. I really like this, it makes me think of anything. It makes me feel really creative and imaginate, and it has really brightened ...

This is really good, and it is very powerful to me. The indifference of life, a looming shadow, the message your poem portrays. I really like the ending, I think ...

Wow. This is really good. I think you portrayed the exact right emotions, and I really enjoyed reading this. I like the way at the end, you changed the way ...

I liked this. It made me think of a father, trying to protect his daughter from her fate that looms near. I think it shows that sort of love, the ...

Wow, this is really interesting. Just reading it made me scared, but curious at the same time, I wanted to find out more, but I had to run. You've packed ...

Hey, I'm Mo, and I'll be reviewing your poem! :D I know it's cheesy, you know it's cheesy, but I for one, like cheesy. :) I liked this poem, especially ...

Cool! It has a confusing feel about it, but it didn't really confuse me, if you know what I mean? (I think it's a good thing. :)) I really enjoyed ...