MissRockers

First of all, I loved the rhyming. It added another level to it! About the feeling behind this, I share empathy with you. I have been there! In my life, ...

Whoa, good job on letting the reader know exactly how you feel. Believe me, I've been there before! And yes, right after the friendship ends, it's when it hurts the ...

Jessa, first of all, I am terribly sorry for your loss. Now, these first comments have picked up on the grammar aspect of this, but, I will stick with the ...

YES YES YES! I love it! I can relate to this SO MUCH!!! And, this just proves the point that ...it's very hard to let your TRUE emotions show. Just ...

Wow. I like this a lot because it really lets the reader know how difficult it is to tell a person the truth! Just the honest truth! The poem is ...

I like this poem because you really don't need to explain much of anything at ALL. These chosen words give so much emotion. Wow. This is something I have to ...

I think a lot of people have picked up on the grammar aspect of this. But, some nitpicks are: After your periods, sometimes you don't capitalize the next letter of ...

WOW....you don't even KNOW how much I can relate to this!!!! My once best friend now treats me like nothing....we're complete strangers, even though we're in two classes together, and ...

Oh yes, I really liked this. It made me very sad. It's so very hard to love yourself for who you are, but, when you do, then others will see ...

Wooow, for this certain little poem, I LOVED IT!! It was so straight to the point and clear. Basically, you need to find true happiness. Personally, I think the length ...

First of all, I love this. It sums up a lot of the questions people have about suffering. Lots of people I know come up to me and ask, how ...

Wonderful! This is exactly what a lot of people go through in their life. People look at us with expectations, and if we don't live up to them, we're basically ...

Wow!!!! You don't know how much I can relate to this!!! I enjoyed reading this very much. Although, I do agree with the other comments, I think the poem could ...

Good job. I liked this. Now, onto my critique! Well, as far as the plot goes, there wasn't much of a real deep plot. It was kind of shallow. It ...

Well, maybe if there were more complete sentences, with less adjectives it would make sense. Now, I'm very confused, I did not get any of the poem, at all. I'm ...