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Milanimo

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: 03- Dysfunctional Love

    Hi! I'm so sorry you haven't had a review yet! Anyways, to the work! The work has very nice description and sensory detail, and I can really see what the ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: Final Destination: Chapter 4 Edited

    Hi! Sorry it's been so long since you've posted and you just got your first and second review! Your description is superb. I can definitely see what is going on ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Snow: The Tale of A Cold Heart (Part VI)

    Hello! I apologize for it to take so long to get a second review. Anyway, this chapter is very pretty. I really like the essence of hope I get from ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: His Legacy - Chapter 3, Part 2

    Hi! Sorry it took so long for a second review! Anyways, to the review! I liked this piece. It was very well explained and although I haven't read any previous ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Forbidden Shadows Chapter Nine

    Hi! This is a very interesting work and I'm so sorry it took so long to get a second review! I like this work and the tension that's in it. ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Necromancer's Reckoning: Chapter 3 and 4

    Hi! Might I ask why the story is in bold? It's a bit shocking for the eyes to see so much. Anyways, back to the review! I like the first ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Stabbing Mannequins Is So 2005

    Hi! I don't know much about lyrics but here we go! I really enjoy this. It sounds like a song that has a lot of teenage angst in it. I ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: about winter

    Hi! This is a great poem with lots of mystery and awe. I can almost feel the chill of winter. The work is very short and sweet. It gets it ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Koala's Climb

    Hi! This poem is nice! It's focused and straight to the point. The poem has nice adverbs and adjectives, and highlights the koalas name almost as if it's a person. ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: The Silent Town

    Hello! I really like this piece. When I read it I imagine myself looking from the eyes of the character rather than from the outside in, which is hard when ...

    May 22, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Deliver Us From Evil...

    Hi! I like the idea behind this work. It's very interesting. One thing I have to say though, is that I agree with @alexismwarr. The story is very cliché. It's ...

    May 21, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Romantic Re: The Accounts of Vincent Frezzier-Intro

    I really like this piece. It has a nice voice and the narrator is very unique. The imagery and figurative language is also very evident. The word choice is clear ...

    May 21, 2014
  • Other » Other, General Re: Sleep

    Hi! First off, this is a very thoughtful work. It explores what late night thoughts do to us, and the mystery of sleep. I do feel a bit put off ...

    May 21, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Roads

    Hello! I really like this poem. It's deep and personal to you, which is always great! I really like how you went into detail, pointing out specific things about roads ...

    May 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Politics, Other Re: Tethered

    Hi! I really liked this piece and how connected each line is to the next. It's good that there's no stanzas or there would be too much of a pause ...

    May 17, 2014


One of the things I love about YWS is the quote generator. For example, I'm reading a really serious work, and then I see "Moo. - cow" at the bottom of the page.
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