Midnightmoon

Welcome!

No problem. opinion, is that it's too easy. Maybe a little more darkness, they're fighting in total darkness, nothing but confusion, then maybe have Hugo enter with a light just ...

Welcome! I'm so sorry you were hurt like that though.

And that poem right there expresses a pain that I've never been able to express. Amazing, Amazing, Amazing!!!!! Deep, deep, deep!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have no corrections to make, no suggestions to ...

Got it!

Thanks!

You are welcome! I also left a comment on your wall. :). I cried when I wrote a lot of my poems. it's hard to control feelings at times.

Thanks!

Beautiful! Definitely caught my attention! I love the mystery of it. I love how you grab the readers attention, and how draw the reader in. I could hear the pine ...

So realistic! Love it!

It was just a suggestion. :D. My poems aren't great either. :). Keep writing!

Hi there. I don't have much to say, just that you need to work on feeling and imagery. As a reader, I saw the words, I read the words, but ...

Thank you! I will definitely fix that error. :D.

Great poem! I have nothing to add or suggestions to make. :D. "See the bright flashes on the distance; Lightening, cracking the silence. Then the sky opens up." I like ...

Interesting poem! I have nothing to add, except to keep writing!