Midnightmoon

Beautiful poem! I like how you express how the rose is like two different things. Almost like human nature. :). I like how you make the reader think about this ...

Cute!! I don't have anything to really add, except maybe a little more fear in there. I was a little worried for Emily, but not really scared for her. And ...

Hi there! I love the theme and I love the emotion in this poem. First off, this line; "Yet dragging with you false promises and reckless self-hate." Was a little ...

I like it! Especially since I'm one of those "Shy people" :D. I have no corrections to make. "The walls are grey, concrete Trapping me inside a nightmare Metal bars ...

Hi there! Overall a good poem, good story-line, just needs a little bit of structure work. Lets start! First off, the beginning, "Everyone at some point in their lives gets ...

Very interesting story. I like it. I only noticed a few grammar errors, and maybe a little more imagery, but that's all! So let's dive in. "The baker did not ...

I like what this poem says, and the way it reaches out to the reader. I only noticed a few things. Shall we dive in? :) First off; Formatting. I ...

I like the theme of this poem, and the way you wrote it, I just have a few suggestions to make. First off, Is there a reason for the format ...

I have no suggestions to make. This is a great poem. It really reaches the readers heart, really makes them feel what you are saying. I love the pain, the ...

Hi there! I like how this poem gives the feeling without it being to long. I like it! I have nothing to say. I do like this verse the best ...

I have nothing to say, except it is a great poem. I would maybe chop a few of the sentences in half, but that's just me. Amazing poem! It really ...

Hey there! It's me, Mockingjay78 again! Can I just start out by saying that I really really like your poems?! :D. Now, lets start! So if you've read my first ...

First off, I'll start with what I like about this poem. I like the feeling and the meaning you put into this poem. It really grabs the reader and pulls ...

I love the feeling of this poem! I just have a few small suggestions. First off, the first line; "Just keep pushing, push through the pain and the doubt. Push ...

I like how simple and short it is, it's easy to read and brings out the feeling. I don't have any suggestions, I really like this poem. :D. "scripting Fates ...