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Okay, I'll have to agree with the other reviewers about how the first stanza sounds awkward. I think that have something to do with the tense mix up happening. See: ...

'Kay. To start of with, I'd like to say, no, this isn't boring. Not in the least. I really like your characters there, especially Hades :). They aren't bland, boring ...

Nice, very nice. The narrator's voice ring through very clearly. It's like I can almost feel their personality. And that's good. You, can call me anything you want. (cause I ...

Rose felt her heart break into a million pieces, as she watched her beloved walk out the door. Rose could not bear the pain, yet she still watched him go. ...

Amusing, very amusing. I liked the story progression and the revelation at the end. Hadn't expected that. And yes, I do get it. Although, like the previous reviewers I have ...

Okay, I found this poem a tad confusing. I think it may have had something to do with this line: I feel your tears stream down my face It took ...

Alright, I'll have to agree with highwhitesocks here about how you given this poem a new flavour and twist. It's actually very refreshing to read something different instead of the ...

you connect with friendship? Good start with the question there. Could she really care about me? Three against one. So here you wrote 'she' meaning one person but then in ...

I agree with the others that some parts sounds forced. I think that have a lot to do with the rhyming. I know you want to rhyme, but you shouldn't ...

So, you have a very nice rhyming pattern there and you kept to it beautifully. The message you have there is also a very strong one. I also loved how ...

This is a beautiful poem. I liked how you repeated 'little girl' to make the girl seemed tiny compared to the world. Was that how you meant it? That's how ...

Hi KCunder, As I was reading this, I noticed that the sentences could be cleared up a tiny bit. You could've used a bit more full stops. I also noticed ...

Very emotional poem. There are a few grammatical nitpicks though. First of all, I think that you need a few commas and full stop at the end of each line ...

That was a pretty good try.The formatting is fine, except that the first and last line is a bit longer than the rest. Can I suggest to you to make ...

Wow. Very, very good poem. It's also very lyrical. Have you realised that? The rhyme and everything, I could almost hear it being sung out as I was reading it. ...