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Re: Shoes Strap Your Feet to the Earth
Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day and the YWS Default Background team. This story/poem was an interesting one as most are. I have to say that after this ...
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Re: When I Cry: Chpt. 2
Knight Malachi here to review on Review Day. So I think I liked this chapter better than chapter one in part because it seems shorter, and also because there is ...
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Re: When I Cry: Chpt. 1
Knight Malachi here to review for Review day, even though you are on the opposite team. I did this review partly for the blue team, and partly because I never ...
Sep 29, 2013 - Re: When I Cry: Chpt. 1 Sep 29, 2013
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Re: Elementary to High school
Knight Malachi here to review for team blue on Review Day. This is a very good poem with a good moral behind it, and I enjoyed reading it. But your ...
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Re: symbiosis
Knight Malachi here to review for you for Review Day. Go YWS Default Background!! So, this is a somewhat funny poem. i loved the lines: "Please don’t lay eggs under ...
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Re: The Candle.
Knight Malachi here to review for team blue on Review Day. So this was a very emotional, but very well done story. I could really envision everything because you used ...
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Re: No. 3, Noel
Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day, team blue! So, I didn't know this was part of a story, I just thought it to be a short story, but ...
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Re: operation imperial [prologue]
Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day. I'd seen your operation Imperial chapters being posted for quite some time, and finally thought I'd see what it was. So here ...
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Re: The Snowman
Knight Malachi here to review for team blue, on Review Day. This was a creative and a fun thing to write about I'm sure. I love all of the random ...
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Re: Up to No Good
Knight Malachi here to Review for Review Day. Hey, lookie here, I found something I hadn't reviewed for you previously:) So when I noticed it was with "superheroes" I thought ...
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Re: Hunger
Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day!!!! Aren't you excited? Anyway . . . This is the second or third of your short writings that I have read, and ...
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Re: i hear the roaring footsteps of an army of dead men
Knight Malachi back to begin Review Day reviews again. This was very good, and very well thought out. your metaphoric language went well, and I especially liked the lines: i ...
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Re: Constellation of thoughts
Knight Malachi here to review for the Knights of the Green Room, and Review Day/ blue team. Just reading the first few lines impressed me. they were beautiful! Whence the ...
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Re: Friends
Knight Malachi to review for Review Day. Negative first. I agree with ajruby12 that the first four lines could use better rhyming. I saw no other errors, but i didn't ...
Sep 29, 2013