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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Welcome To Hell

    Knight Malachi here to review. So Dragon swept the problems into one review, and I will tell you what I thought of the context. It was very descriptive, and easy ...

    Sep 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Tricks

    Knight Malachi with the Knights of the Green Room here to review for you. So I had to re-read this poem to get it. But don't take that as a ...

    Sep 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: I am me

    Knight Malachi here to review, trying to clean up the Green Room. So this is a really cool format. I liked it, and there aren't a lot of poems wit ...

    Sep 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: What day is it?

    Knight Malachi here, exhausted, weary, yet super-duper excited after Review Day. This is a great poem to capture what I, along with all the other contestants went through. Hats off ...

    Sep 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Martin

    Knight Malachi here to review with less than 3 minutes to go for Review Day. This was a nice little poem about something so simple-a pond- and yet you turned ...

    Sep 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Clockwork

    Knight Malachi here to review on Review Day!!!! so to be honest I don't all of what you are saying in this poem, but it was very very well written. ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Once is Never Enough

    Knight Malachi here to review as Review Day comes to a close in a nail-biter. This is exactly how I feel. I always have all these ideas, and think of ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Science, Romantic Re: Falling For Science

    Knight Malachi here to review.Boy is Review Day stressful! Whew! So that in a way a super-duper cool way to write this with all the different scientific stuff. Not something ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Me (for lack of a better title)

    Knight Malachi here to review on a hectic and very competitive Review Day> On top of it being my first one. Whew! First of all think this is a cool ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic Re: Freedom

    Knight Malachi here to review. So first of all there are typos galore, like all over the place. Examples: If you want something, g find someone Should be go, not ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A writer's life

    Knight Malachi here to Review my fellow team blue comrade, as we near the end of Review Day. What can I say ?That you hit it right on the head ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Spiritual Re: Ostara

    Knight Malachi here to review on this crazily awesome Review Day. So this poem is really pretty, and I really like how you described the natural beauty of everything. The ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Ebony

    Knight Malachi here to review on a busy busy Review Day. This poem was . . . wow that was sad. Very emotional and sadly very true of what used ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: A Cup Of Hedgehog

    Knight Malachi here to review for Review Day, which is pretty hectic at the moment. So that is so cute!!!!!! I think that is awesome that you have your cute ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Can You Grasp It In Your Hand?

    Knight Malachi here to review on this grand and glorious, not to mention too-close-for-comfort Review Day. Stay ahead blue team!!!! You can feel the wind blow but, can you grasp ...

    Sep 29, 2013


I was weeping as much for him as her; we do sometimes pity creatures that have none of the feeling either for themselves or others.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights