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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: The Crew 1.2

    Hey, Messy here with another quick review! "Captain?" Fern lifted her head, not knowing what to say. She couldn't think straight, not with what she heard. She did want answers, ...

    Nov 5, 2018
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Leadership - a short essay for a HOBY scholarship

    Hey, I thought I would give you as good of a review as I can on this piece. It's short, and leadership is also an interesting topic, so let's see ...

    Nov 5, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: The Crew 1.1

    Hey concord, I'm here to give you a small review on this piece so I can work to get your other posts out of the green room because they've been ...

    Nov 5, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Hero's Brother (7.2)

    Hey, here for an irregular Sunday night review because for once in my life I did all of my homework on time most of it anyways I don't have a ...

    Nov 5, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Fantasy Re: The Shadow Within- Chapter Three; The Vision

    Hey Dude, here for a little reviewing on Friday Friyay (as a side note before we begin, I like your title. I struggle with those a lot of the time, ...

    Nov 2, 2018
  • Short Story » Horror, Narrative Re: Seen: 12:39 AM

    Hey Kazumi, I'm here to you a lil review on this piece. This isn't a very long piece, so I've only got a few things to say, but let's get ...

    Oct 31, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Hero's Brother (7.1)

    Trying to sneak in 2 reviews since I have some extra time, so sorry if it's a little short. Trying to get back on track where I can give you ...

    Oct 31, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Hero's Brother (6.2)

    Hey Scribs (gonna have to work on the name change) I'm here for one review today:D Got a couple thoughts on the chapter, and then some overall thoughts on your ...

    Oct 31, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Fantasy Re: The Shadow Within- Chapter two; The Dark Scale

    Hey, I'm here for another review today because I am on a rolllll baby! xD On observation, it seems I wounded the creature, it's slick blood still glazed the blade ...

    Oct 29, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: The Shadow Within- Chapter one; awakening.

    Hey, welcome to YWS! If you need anything, feel free to shoot me a PM. A couple notes that you may or may not find useful, but that's kind of ...

    Oct 29, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: Perfect Crime. (4)

    Hey Eros, all caught up finally! Let's go over some things 1. I would highly recommend looking up the legal procedures for how arresting someone works, and what all the ...

    Oct 29, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Perfect Crime. (3)

    Hey Eros, Messy here with a review. This one might be a bit shorter than usual. A lot of what I would say I've already said, so I'll just sum ...

    Oct 29, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: Perfect Crime. (2)

    Hey, here with another (hopefully) helpful review. I have a lot of thoughts on your opening paragraph so Adam's blue eyes showed clear anxiety. He tried to on his mobile ...

    Oct 26, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: Perfect Crime. (1)

    Hey Eros, this sounded intriguing so I added it to my reading list. Here we go! He was moving back and forth slowly on the old flexible chair, causing a ...

    Oct 24, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Hero's Brother (6.1)

    Hey, here for another review. totally catching up hehe Carter could do little to help Gideon and Isha, who were moving silently and efficiently to set up a camp, besides ...

    Oct 22, 2018


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