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hehe one more at least! I've actually got some complaints for once with this story xD 1.) That beginning line just feels cheap. You set up the end of the ...

hey Scribbles I'm here. just about two months late xD I really like this chapter. As has been said previously, you have a nice blend of Carter's everyday job, mixed ...

Hey Noelle, I'm back for two in one. I like this chapter. Again, I feel like the beginning is a bit stereotypical in the description of Rebecca. Would Alekos really ...

Hey, Noelle, trying to get some reviews in today. This chapter starts off a bit tell-y. I'm not sure that we need to know Mary and Terrance's relation in as ...

Hey Scribs, finally got to one of your chapters. Feel awful about taking so loooong but NO REGRETS MOVE FORWARD So. I absolutely adored this chapter. Your conversations feel very ...

Hey, it's me again :D I'm kind of confused. Ryder can see the city, even see a lot of details of the walls and the statues which can't be THAT ...

Hey Noelle, sorry that I'm so incredibly late! So, I'm still kind of lost on the setting of everything. Not so much as in where we are per se, although ...

Hey Noelle, my concentration levels after work are quickly dropping into the negative hundreds but here I am so yay -_- So, there are a decent amount of grammar nitpicks ...

Hey, I'm back again for at least one more review today. Bazzoli had a hose that Carter could have easily used, except that Bazzoli kept it locked in his private ...

Hey Inks, Mess here weeks late. I just have a jumble of thoughts that I'm going to throw out since you've already got some solid reviews. The sky was growing ...

Hey, here as pormised. She wondered how Janet would feel to know she was so similar to the parent she had this big issue with. My life. ^ I'm Janet. ...

Hey mah dood, I'm here finally. "Before Dad went away last time, we had an argument," Janet said. Ironically she was staring at the spot on the table that Daena ...

Hey Biscuit I'm on mobile so sorry if this gets a little sloppy. It's also past my bedtime but eeeeeh. So. This is definitely shorter so there's not as many ...

Hey Biscy, it's meeee. Couple quick thoughts for you! 1. Man, your writing style is so easy to read. Darkpandemonium got most of the nitpicks out of the way, so ...

Hey Scribbles, it's Mess here for a quick review. Couple of thoughts 1. You've got a couple of small typos. You spelled Alleys as Allies and missed a couple H ...