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Re: A Scandal in Gotham #1
Hey, Messy here There isn't a lot of material that you've written here, and so I won't try to drag this review on, but I did have a couple of ...
Dec 30, 2019 -
Re: The Orazat chapter 1
Hey, Messenger here to review this since it looks like it's been in the green room a long time. Typically what I do is just read through the chapter and ...
Apr 2, 2019 -
Re: The Shadow Within- Chapter Six; The Doors of Fate.
Hey, I didn't see you posted a new chapter!! I'm so happy. Let's get right in I step slowly and cautiously, yet confidently into the darkness of the hall, into ...
Mar 28, 2019 -
Re: The Hero's Brother (9.2)
Hey, I'm so bad at reviewing these days, but here I am anyway. Let's get started And Gideon was still on watch. He could hear him pacing back and forth ...
Mar 20, 2019 -
Re: The Hero's Brother (9.1)
Hey, squeaking in another review here for ya! During the time it took to finish tending to Gideon, set up camp, and eat their separate portions of a thrown together ...
Feb 11, 2019 -
Re: The Hero's Brother (8.2)
Hey, I'm here on time as promised so let's just jump right in before school drags me away again! Isha walked over to him and Gideon watched her, apprehensively. Leaves ...
Feb 6, 2019 -
Re: The Shadow Within- Chapter Five; The Building
Hey, here's one more review. If you ever get back and keep writing, please tag me :) The walls are a classic plaster color, one of which one would expect ...
Feb 4, 2019 -
Re: The Shadow Within- Chapter Four, The Discovery
Hwy, I never realized that you came out with more chapters! I know that you're on hiatus right now, but hopefully, if you come back then this review will be ...
Feb 4, 2019 -
Re: The Hero's Brother (8.1)
Hey Scribs, here for another review, so so so much later than intended. It's been a busy week. So, again, no quotes, just some thoughts. 1. Whisper's character is interesting. ...
Nov 9, 2018 -
Re: The Crew 2.1
Hey, here for one last review to get all caught up concord. Let's get right into it. 1) Your pronouns have got me very confused. You have a lot of ...
Nov 5, 2018 -
Re: The Crew 1.2
Hey, Messy here with another quick review! "Captain?" Fern lifted her head, not knowing what to say. She couldn't think straight, not with what she heard. She did want answers, ...
Nov 5, 2018 -
Re: Leadership - a short essay for a HOBY scholarship
Hey, I thought I would give you as good of a review as I can on this piece. It's short, and leadership is also an interesting topic, so let's see ...
Nov 5, 2018 -
Re: The Crew 1.1
Hey concord, I'm here to give you a small review on this piece so I can work to get your other posts out of the green room because they've been ...
Nov 5, 2018 -
Re: The Hero's Brother (7.2)
Hey, here for an irregular Sunday night review because for once in my life I did all of my homework on time most of it anyways I don't have a ...
Nov 5, 2018 -
Re: The Shadow Within- Chapter Three; The Vision
Hey Dude, here for a little reviewing on Friday Friyay (as a side note before we begin, I like your title. I struggle with those a lot of the time, ...
Nov 2, 2018
