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  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: A Scandal in Gotham #1

    Hey, Messy here There isn't a lot of material that you've written here, and so I won't try to drag this review on, but I did have a couple of ...

    Dec 30, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Orazat chapter 1

    Hey, Messenger here to review this since it looks like it's been in the green room a long time. Typically what I do is just read through the chapter and ...

    Apr 2, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Fantasy Re: The Shadow Within- Chapter Six; The Doors of Fate.

    Hey, I didn't see you posted a new chapter!! I'm so happy. Let's get right in I step slowly and cautiously, yet confidently into the darkness of the hall, into ...

    Mar 28, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Hero's Brother (9.2)

    Hey, I'm so bad at reviewing these days, but here I am anyway. Let's get started And Gideon was still on watch. He could hear him pacing back and forth ...

    Mar 20, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Hero's Brother (9.1)

    Hey, squeaking in another review here for ya! During the time it took to finish tending to Gideon, set up camp, and eat their separate portions of a thrown together ...

    Feb 11, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Hero's Brother (8.2)

    Hey, I'm here on time as promised so let's just jump right in before school drags me away again! Isha walked over to him and Gideon watched her, apprehensively. Leaves ...

    Feb 6, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Shadow Within- Chapter Five; The Building

    Hey, here's one more review. If you ever get back and keep writing, please tag me :) The walls are a classic plaster color, one of which one would expect ...

    Feb 4, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Fantasy Re: The Shadow Within- Chapter Four, The Discovery

    Hwy, I never realized that you came out with more chapters! I know that you're on hiatus right now, but hopefully, if you come back then this review will be ...

    Feb 4, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Hero's Brother (8.1)

    Hey Scribs, here for another review, so so so much later than intended. It's been a busy week. So, again, no quotes, just some thoughts. 1. Whisper's character is interesting. ...

    Nov 9, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: The Crew 2.1

    Hey, here for one last review to get all caught up concord. Let's get right into it. 1) Your pronouns have got me very confused. You have a lot of ...

    Nov 5, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: The Crew 1.2

    Hey, Messy here with another quick review! "Captain?" Fern lifted her head, not knowing what to say. She couldn't think straight, not with what she heard. She did want answers, ...

    Nov 5, 2018
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Leadership - a short essay for a HOBY scholarship

    Hey, I thought I would give you as good of a review as I can on this piece. It's short, and leadership is also an interesting topic, so let's see ...

    Nov 5, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: The Crew 1.1

    Hey concord, I'm here to give you a small review on this piece so I can work to get your other posts out of the green room because they've been ...

    Nov 5, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Hero's Brother (7.2)

    Hey, here for an irregular Sunday night review because for once in my life I did all of my homework on time most of it anyways I don't have a ...

    Nov 5, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Fantasy Re: The Shadow Within- Chapter Three; The Vision

    Hey Dude, here for a little reviewing on Friday Friyay (as a side note before we begin, I like your title. I struggle with those a lot of the time, ...

    Nov 2, 2018


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