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I'm back. Is that menacing or exciting? I don't know. you tell me. o.o Val's eyes sparkled, her previous misfortunes forgotten, and she just managed to stifle a delighted scream. ...

Hi there! Go team green forever ammirite There's not much to say on specifics as this was a short and pretty clean prologue where grammar and the technical aspects are ...

*Ignoring all grammarly tips on poetry is almost comical* hi friend. Let's hop in shall we? The title intrigued me and the poem did not disappoint. there is a strange ...

hi there. First off, welcome to YWS! This poem conjured up a lot of things for me all at once. for one, it reminded me of how Galadriel meets Sauron ...

Hey there, and welcome to YWS :) As an overarching comment before I get into specifics, I wanted to say that, much like I used to, you seem to struggle ...

Let's do this. One. Last. Time. I really have been enjoying these. I do think that a girl with pink hair would've stood out more in the last chapter though, ...

Oh man! Bonus content; I'm so in. Hahaha those first few sentences rang so true to me as someone who has a bit of PTSD from an intersection where I ...

Back to finish this off. Wow. I didn't expect this to punch as hard as it did. I knew Lina was likely going to die to sacrifice herself for the ...

Eh, why not wrap this thing up in one day ha! Alright, everything is coming crashing down together at one time. We've had a decent amount of build-up to this ...

Two for One ain't bad, right? Let's get to it. One thing that you may want to keep in mind if you intend to do more short stories, is that ...

Hey, Messy back again. I didn't have any big grammar or prose complaints so just some overall thoughts today. Starting off this chapter you took all the tension out of ...

Hi, Messy here. For reviews I read through, commenting in chronological order as I find stuff so hopefully it's easy for you to track :) Their faces were still, and ...

Hey, Messy here! Right off that bat, I like this story. It's the complete opposite tone of the last P4P story I read which had a comedic tone, so switching ...

Hey, Messy here! Let's hop into this review. Overall I like this story. I like the almost whimsical mysticism, very much like ACC has throughout its pages. There's a feeling ...

And I'm to the last one you have posted! Messy is back Wait, is this the end? I'm not actually opposed to that if it's the case. I like the ...