MemoryHunter

Hey wassuuuup it's MemoryHunter here to review your poem! First off, I can feel that it's a very raw emotion that you're pouring out here. You feel that, thus you ...

HELLO I AM MEMORYHUNTER HERE TO REVIEW YOUR NOVEL CHAPTER THINGY! First of all, the theme is great. I always admire stories about friendship because I can probably relate. Friendship ...

HELLO, MEMORYHUNTER HERE TO REVIEW YOUR SHORT STORY! WELCOME TO YWS!!! Okay let us begin. I'll do it chronologically if you don't mind. I was careful to make every step ...

Hello there, MemoryHunter here to review your poem! First of all, I like what you did with the different tenses of drink and its past participle drunk. It already shows ...

Hey there! I am here to review your poem. Actually, I have read this long before I made this review because, I had to admit, the big chunk of poetry ...

MAD THIS IS AWESOME YOU ARE SO GREAT AT THIS! Seriously. Personally, you are a better poet than a novelist. But that's just my stupid brain thinking, be what ever ...

Hi there, MemoryHunter here to review your short story~ I have to admit, when I first read this I was amazed by the descriptions et cetera. It was nice for ...

Hello, MemoryHunter here to review your short story~ First of all, forgive me if I suck at reviewing because fictional short stories are not my forte at all, but I'm ...

HEY HERE MEMORYHUNTER (I know, I switched them up xD) So this is my second review. I didn't review the other works because the other guys already summed up what ...

HEY MAAAD WASSUP THIS IS MY FIRST REVIEW IN FREAKING MONTHS DAYS YEARS! So, I reviewed on the first poem you published in this site and I can tell that ...

Hey there Mad, long time no see! So, I told you all before that I was going to take a break from YWS because of some things. I did, in ...

Hey, I know, I have read this before but I'll only review now. What late date. Anyway, I'm here to review your chapter~ I personally love the Eloise and Gabriel ...

Hi, I'm here to review your short story briefly as I can~ So, you started weakly in my opinion. Maybe you could rephrase that and cut it into two. Like, ...

Wow, I feel like a rule breaker. 13 years old and read this. *watch out, we got a badass over here* But actually, it's a little bit humorous. I'm not ...

Welp, I have nothing to say anymore. The other reviewers stole all my words ;-;. Okaaay, I loved this one xD it kind of reminds me of my writing style ...