MeganWeaver

The imagery in this is brilliant, I really liked the way you described everything. The rhyming scheme was good too and I liked the way you personified the rose. To ...

I really enjoyed reading this, I'm glad I took the time to. I loved the imagery and the vocabulary I couldn't fault them. The only thing I will say is ...

This was amazing in my opinion, the fact that something so beautiful, like the ribbons, could actually be something as poisonus as a lie is fantastic. It's like when the ...

Wow, this poem is really true to life in some aspects. I love the imagery you used and I think that it was really well written. My only improvement would ...

I really liked this poem as it seems to be very true to a lot of frindships, the only thing I'd like to say is that you have made a ...

This is a well written poem I believe, however, you used the word "now" four times in the first six lines. I think perhaps re wording this a little would ...

I totaly agree with MiRaCLeS there are so many other adjectives to describe the sea other than the ones you have used. I too feel that nice is a really ...

I loved this poem :] It was really light and descriptive, my only criticism would be that the first stanza is written with alternative rhyme but the rest isn't. I ...

I really like the emotions you have presented in this poem. It shows the true side and it's put simply. My only criticism is that this line It’s not fair ...

WOW! I honestly felt every emotion there. I think this is an amazing piece of writing and it deffinately tugged on my heart strings. I really felt for the victim ...

I loved the emotion present in this I think it was communicated well :] My advice would be to lengthen out your lines because it's a very quick read and ...

I love this because it's a poem a lot of people can relate to :D It's very well structured and the detail is great. I don't think I have any ...

I really liked this, I can relate to it which is what makes it even better. :D I enjoyed your writing style and I think it flowed well. I don't ...

I really liked the form you took on when writing this piece, I feel it really spoke to your audience. However, I would suggest perhaps improving the vocabulary ever so ...