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Re: Uh, Watt?
Hi, HolographicLadybug! I was reading this with the voices of Abbott and Costello in my head, which speaks well to your accuracy on the routine. I liked the gradual escalation ...
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Re: The Distant Dream
I don't often read political works, but this one caught my eye. Hello, I am Meerkat here to review. World unity, whether under the laurel of peace or the banner ...
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Re: GalactiCats
If I had a dollar for every unfunny cat pun you used in this story, I would be...broke. Honestly, this was hilarious! Puns are my weakness, and combining them with ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: The Mish-Mash Adventures of Slavokia and the Losers: Slavokia's Childhood
Hi, I'm Meerkat (no radioactive mutagens involved) here to review this story. First, you have a really creative idea going here. People being mutated into anthropomorphic animals opens up a ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Renegade (X Ambassadors) Parody: Halloween
Hello, Artemis28. I'm pretty late on this review, but I love X Ambassadors and had to read this. I am re-listening to Renegades as I write this, for reference. I ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: To Slaughter, Incinerate, Run Over with a Quacking Tractor, Murder, Shred, Feed to Rabid Bunnies, Blow up, and Exile a Mocking Bird
Hi, HolographicLadybug! Full disclosure, I can't fully agree with your opinion here. In fact, To Kill a Mockingbird was one of the only school-forced books I read that I semi-enjoyed. ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: At the Lake - Scene
Hello, Meerkat here with a review for this scene. It certainly makes me want to know the backstory of these characters and of their relationship. That being said, this brief ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: untitled chapter 1 -Launch
Hello! This is a really interesting story you have begun here. The imagery gave a sense of wonder and excitement as your characters achieved what humanity has been longing for ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Toy Soldiers
Hello. This is somewhat of a late review, but I was very interested in this story. The contrast was very effective, creating a clash between the innocent playfulness of a ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Defying Fate Chapter 1
Hi, I'm Meerkat here with a review. The story starts off very strongly. You hooked the reader immediately by placing high stakes—your main character's life—in the first sentence. The inclusion ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Calista and the City of Glass: Chapter 1
Hi! One thing I really admired about this story was the title. "Calista and the City of Glass." It rolls off the tongue beautifully. You also did a good job ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Writing ailments; their common symptoms, causes and general first aid.
Hi! I really like this; it's quite thorough and informative. The comparison of writing errors to medical problems was very clever. Specific notes: Bad hygiene: a very fitting analogy, especially ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Another Night!
Hi, I'm Meerkat with a review. Let's get the boring stuff out of the way first: grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc. There were some small mistakes that were slightly distracting while ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Holographic Ladybug's Second Class
Meerkat here for reviewing! First of all, I love the stylistic choices made in this piece. The formatting was crazy, creative, wild, and fun, like a roller coaster for the ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: The Night Accepts You Gently
Hello, Meerkat here with a review. Firstly, your emulation of Dylan Thomas's poetic style with a twist on the message was excellently done. For the most part, you followed the ...
Dec 30, 2015
