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  • Script » Humor, Other Re: Uh, Watt?

    Hi, HolographicLadybug! I was reading this with the voices of Abbott and Costello in my head, which speaks well to your accuracy on the routine. I liked the gradual escalation ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Politics Re: The Distant Dream

    I don't often read political works, but this one caught my eye. Hello, I am Meerkat here to review. World unity, whether under the laurel of peace or the banner ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: GalactiCats

    If I had a dollar for every unfunny cat pun you used in this story, I would be...broke. Honestly, this was hilarious! Puns are my weakness, and combining them with ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Mish-Mash Adventures of Slavokia and the Losers: Slavokia's Childhood

    Hi, I'm Meerkat (no radioactive mutagens involved) here to review this story. First, you have a really creative idea going here. People being mutated into anthropomorphic animals opens up a ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Humor Re: Renegade (X Ambassadors) Parody: Halloween

    Hello, Artemis28. I'm pretty late on this review, but I love X Ambassadors and had to read this. I am re-listening to Renegades as I write this, for reference. I ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, Review Re: To Slaughter, Incinerate, Run Over with a Quacking Tractor, Murder, Shred, Feed to Rabid Bunnies, Blow up, and Exile a Mocking Bird

    Hi, HolographicLadybug! Full disclosure, I can't fully agree with your opinion here. In fact, To Kill a Mockingbird was one of the only school-forced books I read that I semi-enjoyed. ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: At the Lake - Scene

    Hello, Meerkat here with a review for this scene. It certainly makes me want to know the backstory of these characters and of their relationship. That being said, this brief ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Technology Re: untitled chapter 1 -Launch

    Hello! This is a really interesting story you have begun here. The imagery gave a sense of wonder and excitement as your characters achieved what humanity has been longing for ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Politics, General Re: Toy Soldiers

    Hello. This is somewhat of a late review, but I was very interested in this story. The contrast was very effective, creating a clash between the innocent playfulness of a ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • » General, General Re: Defying Fate Chapter 1

    Hi, I'm Meerkat here with a review. The story starts off very strongly. You hooked the reader immediately by placing high stakes—your main character's life—in the first sentence. The inclusion ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Calista and the City of Glass: Chapter 1

    Hi! One thing I really admired about this story was the title. "Calista and the City of Glass." It rolls off the tongue beautifully. You also did a good job ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Literature, Humor Re: Writing ailments; their common symptoms, causes and general first aid.

    Hi! I really like this; it's quite thorough and informative. The comparison of writing errors to medical problems was very clever. Specific notes: Bad hygiene: a very fitting analogy, especially ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Another Night!

    Hi, I'm Meerkat with a review. Let's get the boring stuff out of the way first: grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc. There were some small mistakes that were slightly distracting while ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: Holographic Ladybug's Second Class

    Meerkat here for reviewing! First of all, I love the stylistic choices made in this piece. The formatting was crazy, creative, wild, and fun, like a roller coaster for the ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Night Accepts You Gently

    Hello, Meerkat here with a review. Firstly, your emulation of Dylan Thomas's poetic style with a twist on the message was excellently done. For the most part, you followed the ...

    Dec 30, 2015


The true adventurer goes forth aimless and uncalculating to meet and greet unknown fate.
— O. Henry (William Sydney Porter)