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Hey there. I'm here to review this lovely piece. First off, a quick overall thing. In Stanza IV, the person the narrator is talking to leaves them for some reason, ...

Hey there! Here to review your poem for you. So, overall I really liked it. As previous reviewers have said, you did a really good job with the pacing and ...

Hey there! Here to review this lovely piece for you. Because this is so short and mostly perfect, I'm not sure I'm going to be much help, but I'll try ...

Hey there Adrian! I saw this a while ago and thought I'd review it today. It is, frankly, beautiful. I think you did the poem justice. I don't have a ...

Gonna say it straight up front: this is beautiful. It flows nicely, and reads well aloud. I'm just going make a few comments on formatting, since that's the main thing ...

Hey there! I love your poem. I know exactly how you feel, and in fact I've been going through something similar recently. I am absolutely in love with your second ...

This is pretty cool. You have a gift for internal rhyme. I understand that you may want to not use a lot of punctuation for effect, and I see why. ...

Ooh, this is pretty. I love nostalgic poems. I love your imagery - it's really clear and powerful. Overall, I think your content is really good, so I'm just going ...

Hi there! These are really beautiful. I love haikus when they're done right. It's amazing how a simple seventeen syllables can capture the essence of life. Frankly, I don't have ...

Hi! I'm going to say it straight up: this was beautiful. Let me know when you film it, and I'll happily watch it. Unfortunately, because it was so pretty and ...

Hey there! Your description is really strong. I loved all the imagery. However, since you asked, I didn't really get the sense that the person was living with an addict. ...

Wow, this is really beautiful. I don't have a lot to say about it overall, because it's just so lovely, so I'll just go through a couple nitpicks. I like ...

This is really awesome. It's a great dystopian short story. I especially love how creative expression was banned, but it was older people who tended to break that rule. Generally ...

Hey there! This is a really pretty description piece. I haven't really heard of a horse and rider dancing, and now I want to go see that. I love the ...

Hey there! Interesting poem you've got. The first thing I would have to say is to break it up into stanzas. Cleverclogs already told you how to do that, though, ...