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Yay for finding out about the lights! So, I love what you did about how she discovers the light. I just thought it was really cool. I like how she's ...

Back again. I'm curious to find out what's going on with Paula. I like that they have this friction - it makes things more interesting, and it does a good ...

And back again. Hmm... there's just not that much to say about this one. It's definitely important that yes, this Valnr is as powerful as some of the generals, and ...

Jasnah. Really, Lightsong, really? Now I can't get the image of Jasnah as a modern-day schoolgirl out of my head. >.< Also, why is it Jannah now? Did you just ...

Here we go again. :) All in all, not bad. You've gotten better at writing fight scenes just over the course of this novel. It's easier to follow what's going ...

Well. That exploded. xD While I wasn't at all surprised at the reactions of the two girls (though I hadn't expected Paula to stand up for herself like that), I ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review, and I'm sorry if I say anything that doesn't apply because you explained it in a previous chapter. So, I like the ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review, and I apologize if I get stuff wrong because I haven't read previous parts of this. I like this! I really like ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this lovely review day. So, this is pretty well-written. You're good at setting the mood of the scene - it feels ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review. I think I may have review a previous part of this, so sorry if I repeat myself. The first thing I noticed ...

Hey there, I'm here for a quick review this Review Day! Overall, this was pretty good, if rather short. I like how you cut away before showing her grief and ...

Hello! I'm here for a quick review today. I liked this! I like reading good starts to novels, and yours so far is pretty strong. I like that Elicia has ...

Hey there! Interesting article. Overall very readable, but I think your conclusions could be better supported. The first issue is your evidence. Far too much of it is hearsay, and ...

Hey there! I'm bored and need to review. So this was pretty funny. The jokes were kinda lame, but that was what made it all the more funny. At first, ...

Hey there! I saw this in the Green Room and thought I'd come review so I can get my next star. xD I like this! I really like Harkyn. He's ...