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Yay! Discussion and exposition (I assume) will be forthcoming! You said in chat this was unedited, and to be honest, I can tell - you have a few more awkward ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by and review this. So, scripts! I'm not an expert on them, but hopefully I can help a bit anyway. I thought this wasn't ...

Hey there! I'm here to get this out of the Green Room for you. So, I must confess I'm a little surprised this hasn't gotten noticed more. Usually YWS loves ...

Hey there! I thought I'd drop by and review this, seeing as it's only had one review all this time. So, this is a good story. Clear, easy to read, ...

Hey alliyah! I thought I'd drop by and give you my inexpert opinion on this. :D So, I want to love it. There's a gem of a poem in here ...

Hey felistia! I thought I'd review this for RevMo. I'm not sure I have too much to say - overall, this is a pretty good chapter. I think you do ...

Okay, I can't resist, I'm going to review this. So yeah, this is funny. Nerdy biblical references for the win. I kind of really want to hear you perform it ...

Hey there! I'm here to review this chapter! Apologies for not having read previous parts, but hopefully this'll be helpful anyway. Overall, this is pretty good. It's interesting and coherent ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review for RevMo! Overall, I think this is a pretty interesting story. Having Andrew get sucked into his own game is definitely story-worthy ...

Hey there. :P Thought I'd drop a review on this. So! Short but pretty interesting part. On the surface, not much happens, but I can already see things waiting to ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review for RevMo! So this is an interesting start. Something that I really like about this is that Persephone and her parents are ...

Hey there! I'm here for a quick review for RevMo! This is a pretty good start - a bit slower-paced, but already you hint at the tension and conflict within ...

Aw, this is so sad. And believe me, this is far from terrible. I really enjoyed it. Something I really liked about this was your main character - just how ...

Hey there. So I know this was posted ages ago, and maybe you don't feel this way anymore, but I thought I'd say something anyway. I'm Christian too, and I've ...

Well, this was interesting. Technical things: 1. You have a lot of typos in here. I'm not going to point them all out, but they're things like forgetting commas and ...