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Re: Cedar Ravine: 3.2
Hey! I realized I'm behind on reviewing this, so I thought I'd start here and then review chapter 4. I feel bad for Papa. xD He's trying to persevere, but ...
Mar 23, 2018 -
Re: Provenance: Chapter 1.2
Hey there! I'm here for my side of the exchange. :D So you questioned the POV you're writing in, and I understand why - at the beginning, this is clearly ...
Mar 22, 2018 -
Re: Outsiders- Chapter 1
Hey Holly! I'm back for a review on this first chapter! So, here we are in the actual first chapter, rather than the prologue. Prologues are tricky, and a lot ...
Mar 19, 2018 -
Re: Elemental [1]
Hey Light! This is cool, so I thought I'd go ahead and give it a quick review. I can see that this is a short story set in the same ...
Mar 18, 2018 -
Re: ShaikhTheWorld
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this interesting piece. I interpreted this as a quick introduction of yourself from the perspective of somebody else, ...
Mar 18, 2018 -
Re: The Bible Isn't Moral Part 1 (Slavery)
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. The Essay 1. You should cite your sources better. What translation of the Bible are you using? (this ...
Mar 18, 2018 -
Re: Outsiders-Othero
Hey there Holly! Glad to see you're making a comeback to the site. :) I thought this looked interesting, so I figured I'd go ahead and review it. I really ...
Mar 17, 2018 -
Re: The Last Hope~ Chapter Two
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. I read chapter one and now I'm going to review this chapter. :D This is such a cute ...
Mar 17, 2018 -
Re: Back to the Beginning Chapter 1
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. I'll say this up front: although I know 1D, of course, and have listened to some of their ...
Mar 17, 2018 -
Re: Magician's Wars Chapter 3
Hey, kman! I'm back for another review today. Overall, this is actually a pretty solid chapter. Gabrielle's arrival especially was very entertaining because she's just so fun as a character, ...
Mar 9, 2018 -
Re: And When You Opened Your Eyes Part.2
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this interesting poem today. Note that I haven't reviewed poetry in a while, so I might be a ...
Mar 8, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 16.1: Ilami
Hey Light! I'm here for the review in a timely fashion this time. :D So this is an interesting chapter! I'm glad we're moving right along and getting to see ...
Mar 4, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 15.2: Gael
So many questions! It's great that we get to be introduced to a deity like Serra now - she adds a whole other dimension to everything that's going on and ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 15.1: Gael
Oooooooooh wow. Wow wow wow. So it's Serra talking to him. I really had no idea who it was before, but it totally makes sense and is still completely unexpected. ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 14.2: Ilami
Hi Light! I am finally, finally here, and first off I want to apologize very sincerely for neglecting this for an entire month. Part of it was mental health stuff ...
Feb 25, 2018
