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Re: Cedar Ravine: 4.1
And I'm back again! Aww, Justin is sweet. Maddie shouldn't be such a jerk to him. Hopefully she'll change her tune eventually. And okay, what is up with their house ...
Fri Mar 23, 2018 3:02 am -
Re: Cedar Ravine: 3.2
Hey! I realized I'm behind on reviewing this, so I thought I'd start here and then review chapter 4. I feel bad for Papa. xD He's trying to persevere, but ...
Fri Mar 23, 2018 2:15 am -
Re: Provenance: Chapter 1.2
Hey there! I'm here for my side of the exchange. :D So you questioned the POV you're writing in, and I understand why - at the beginning, this is clearly ...
Thu Mar 22, 2018 11:32 am -
Re: Outsiders- Chapter 1
Hey Holly! I'm back for a review on this first chapter! So, here we are in the actual first chapter, rather than the prologue. Prologues are tricky, and a lot ...
Mon Mar 19, 2018 9:48 pm -
Re: Elemental [1]
Hey Light! This is cool, so I thought I'd go ahead and give it a quick review. I can see that this is a short story set in the same ...
Sun Mar 18, 2018 10:04 pm -
Re: ShaikhTheWorld
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this interesting piece. I interpreted this as a quick introduction of yourself from the perspective of somebody else, ...
Sun Mar 18, 2018 1:06 am -
Re: The Bible Isn't Moral Part 1 (Slavery)
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. The Essay 1. You should cite your sources better. What translation of the Bible are you using? (this ...
Sun Mar 18, 2018 12:54 am -
Re: Outsiders-Othero
Hey there Holly! Glad to see you're making a comeback to the site. :) I thought this looked interesting, so I figured I'd go ahead and review it. I really ...
Sat Mar 17, 2018 10:53 am -
Re: The Last Hope~ Chapter Two
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. I read chapter one and now I'm going to review this chapter. :D This is such a cute ...
Sat Mar 17, 2018 10:33 am -
Re: Back to the Beginning Chapter 1
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review today. I'll say this up front: although I know 1D, of course, and have listened to some of their ...
Sat Mar 17, 2018 10:15 am -
Re: Magician's Wars Chapter 3
Hey, kman! I'm back for another review today. Overall, this is actually a pretty solid chapter. Gabrielle's arrival especially was very entertaining because she's just so fun as a character, ...
Fri Mar 09, 2018 12:28 pm -
Re: And When You Opened Your Eyes Part.2
Hey there! I thought I'd drop by for a quick review on this interesting poem today. Note that I haven't reviewed poetry in a while, so I might be a ...
Thu Mar 08, 2018 6:39 am -
Re: Chapter 16.1: Ilami
Hey Light! I'm here for the review in a timely fashion this time. :D So this is an interesting chapter! I'm glad we're moving right along and getting to see ...
Sun Mar 04, 2018 1:16 am -
Re: Chapter 15.2: Gael
So many questions! It's great that we get to be introduced to a deity like Serra now - she adds a whole other dimension to everything that's going on and ...
Sun Feb 25, 2018 11:15 pm -
Re: Chapter 15.1: Gael
Oooooooooh wow. Wow wow wow. So it's Serra talking to him. I really had no idea who it was before, but it totally makes sense and is still completely unexpected. ...
Sun Feb 25, 2018 9:56 pm
