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Not exactly sure what this is supposed to mean? Who is the 'rose' supposed to be? I liked the imagery and the way it was written, although it was a ...

Aw, this is cute! I agree, in a few places the rhyme threw off the flow, but really, it's a very cute, sweet, short and descriptive piece. Nice job.

Whoa! This is really sweet. You do a great job at building up anticipation in a very short, evocative words! I love this! It's short and awesome, and everybody'll love ...

Um, I have to agree...what exactly are you going for with this? It's basically just a random person describing an everyday morning....

After I read this I had to laugh!!! Hilarious. Made my day :P It's not a poem, but it's really quite funny.

You painted a very vivid picture, so good job. It was short and sweet and clear. I quite enjoyed it. :P

Wow, this gave me the chills! Amazing. I agree, it was like black silk! There really isn't anything helpful I feel I can say. The rhyme was good; didn't seem ...

This was good, but DEFINITELY put it into stanzas!!! It was really hard to read. Also, you should use " if it's talking.

I love this! The clicked it precisely because you said NOT to!!! You are so right. LOL! Cute poem, good job. It was creative and original, yet not 'weird' or ...

Yeah, I kinda realized posting them at the same time was a bad idea. Oops! Will not repeat that mistake. Glad you liked it. Again, I won't have time to ...

Hey, thanks so much for the review!!! I totally know what you mean about Melody's thoughts. I ALWAYS forget to mention what the people look like. A big fault of ...

It's pretty, but I'm sorry, I don't get it supposed to be like the earth and sky in harmony or something?

Wow, very emotional, brought a tear to my eye! Great job on portraying the emotion so the reader feels it.

I love this! Nothing to nit-pick! It was humorous and light. A very enjoyable read. :)

Ah, Ok. Sorry I didn't get it. :P