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Re: The Journey
Wow. This is beautiful!!! It's very well-written, easy to read, and grabs the reader's attention with the wonderful wording. It's very true - the message, and applies to a lot ...
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: Fairy-girl
This was very beautiful, and I liked it a lot. :) I don't really have anything constructive to say, so will just say, you did a great job!
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: A Kiss Without Lips
As far as love poems go, this one I quite liked. It was, as others said, very emotional and thought-provoking. Nice job!
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Conquered
Wow, very emotional, strong piece! I don't have much to say other then that - it looks good in all areas and is a very deep poem.
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: The Puppeteer
Awesome job! I really enjoyed this. Sorry I don't have anything productive to comment on!
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: The Moon's Love Poem
Wow, this is a beautiful piece! I love the fantastic imagery, wording, thoughtfulness....it's just perfect!
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Bumblebee's Journey
This is so darn....CUTE!!! I gotta agree with TheScratchMan. You just make that bee sound adorable. I was grinning while reading this and I didn't spot any errors. Such a ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: The Storm
This is awesome! As Daisuki said, the personification was excellent! It's clean and tidy on grammar, punctuation, has great flow and rhyme. Nice, nice.
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Dead Language
This was interesting, and quite well written. I think you should arrange the stanzas into some sort of form, as it looks a little messy and the stanzas seem random ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: Music
Agreed. Just a list of words. You could make this into something, but right now...eh.
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: Upon the Mercurian Shore
This was quite nice. It was a cute, tidy little narrative and I enjoyed reading it. Sorry I don't have something more constructive to say!
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: The Writer's Lament
Nice! This was quite amusing. Definitely an enjoyable read! :) Made me smile.
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: I was there
This is good, very emotional, and a great ending. It has a good rhythm, and seems to flow well.
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: Love Is
Aw, this is a sweet little poem. It's got a nice message and was an easy, enjoyable read.
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: An Artist and His Brush
Wow, this is...a gorgeous and wonderful poem! I'm in love with it!!! You've done an AMAZING job!I don't have much to say other then complimenting it. It's got great imagery, ...
Jun 10, 2011
