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Matthews

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Journey

    Wow. This is beautiful!!! It's very well-written, easy to read, and grabs the reader's attention with the wonderful wording. It's very true - the message, and applies to a lot ...

    Sep 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Fairy-girl

    This was very beautiful, and I liked it a lot. :) I don't really have anything constructive to say, so will just say, you did a great job!

    Aug 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Kiss Without Lips

    As far as love poems go, this one I quite liked. It was, as others said, very emotional and thought-provoking. Nice job!

    Aug 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Conquered

    Wow, very emotional, strong piece! I don't have much to say other then that - it looks good in all areas and is a very deep poem.

    Jun 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Puppeteer

    Awesome job! I really enjoyed this. Sorry I don't have anything productive to comment on!

    Jun 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Moon's Love Poem

    Wow, this is a beautiful piece! I love the fantastic imagery, wording, thoughtfulness....it's just perfect!

    Jun 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Bumblebee's Journey

    This is so darn....CUTE!!! I gotta agree with TheScratchMan. You just make that bee sound adorable. I was grinning while reading this and I didn't spot any errors. Such a ...

    Jun 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Storm

    This is awesome! As Daisuki said, the personification was excellent! It's clean and tidy on grammar, punctuation, has great flow and rhyme. Nice, nice.

    Jun 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dead Language

    This was interesting, and quite well written. I think you should arrange the stanzas into some sort of form, as it looks a little messy and the stanzas seem random ...

    Jun 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Music

    Agreed. Just a list of words. You could make this into something, but right now...eh.

    Jun 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Upon the Mercurian Shore

    This was quite nice. It was a cute, tidy little narrative and I enjoyed reading it. Sorry I don't have something more constructive to say!

    Jun 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Writer's Lament

    Nice! This was quite amusing. Definitely an enjoyable read! :) Made me smile.

    Jun 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: I was there

    This is good, very emotional, and a great ending. It has a good rhythm, and seems to flow well.

    Jun 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Love Is

    Aw, this is a sweet little poem. It's got a nice message and was an easy, enjoyable read.

    Jun 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: An Artist and His Brush

    Wow, this is...a gorgeous and wonderful poem! I'm in love with it!!! You've done an AMAZING job!I don't have much to say other then complimenting it. It's got great imagery, ...

    Jun 10, 2011


pain is that feeling when you are feeling hurt, but it never goes away leaving me hurt. oh it hurts.
— Dragonthorn