Matthews

I liked the meaning behind this, and it's rather cheery and inspiring. The last stanza is by far my favorite, (which is a good thing - I've noticed a lot ...

For a love poem I liked this. In some areas the flow was a little off, but it was OK. The questions you asked were very real, and something I ...

First off, I like the...leafy topic, and it was written nicely enough. You definitely need to put this into stanzas, or lines or something to make it easier to read, ...

I liked it, and I enjoyed the repeat of 'A rose for you, my darling' at the beginning of each stanza. It's rather a cliche' piece, but I didn't mind ...

K, first off this could be quite a powerful poem, that a lot of people can relate to. Your grammar and punctuation (or lack there of!) is rather irritating, and ...

Not exactly sure what this is supposed to mean... And I agree, you could use a bit more punctuation. Also, near the end, you repeat 'ground' three times. A bit ...

I really like your style of writing - the voice, the wording...nice! Alone, truely alone Tragically awaiting the nonexistant end 'nonexistent' should be written 'non-existent'. Oh, immortal vexation J

K, I have to say, I don't really like all. Personal taste perhaps, but it's rather cliche' as there are a MILLION poems very similar to this out there. It's ...

This is super cute! I love it! Before you read this poem, beautiful, I’d like you to say ‘yes’. I thank you very much if you did it, 'I' should ...

K, the picture is beautiful, and the poem is quite well written. I'll give you a quick review! Translucent web drapes down, haunted with Secrets of distant past. Here the ...

This would probably go in 'narrative poetry' since it tells a story, but it's not a big deal. I lost a lot of blood that night, I lost a lot ...

This is really pretty, and something a lot of people can relate to. Everyone knows someone you can 'talk' to without saying anything. The rhyme doesn't seem forced, and I ...

Hmm, this is interesting. I'm not sure what you're talking about but it's rather interesting anyway. Really Old Mislaid The first that fled Right here, you repeat 'fled' immediately after ...

Aw, this is cute. It paints a pretty picture, and reading it is...calming. I like the 2nd stanza best, and personalizing peace was a cool idea. You *could* use more ...

I liked the first few stanzas then you lost me. I honestly don't get what you're trying to say! Sorry :( Curious curious, I am, to know what it could ...