Master_Yoda

You're an amazing poet Audy, and I miss this. A little bit on the melancholic side for my tastes, though. We still have dreams and still have dreamers and the ...

I read this expecting to discover why you believe in God, and you clarified for me. You don't know why you believe in God, but have had some sort of ...

Hearken to me, scribe! Within these pages, I will elucidate and expound some secrets of this craft. If you do not listen closely, they will not take root within your ...

A character teaser? Not what I would have thought of as a character teaser. Maybe a first impressions teaser. I'm going to divide this review up into two parts. The ...

Oh master of words, I profess my concern your condescension means little - strikes very few chords and seems far too cocky for a rhythm so knotty So slick an ...

I think the premise of this story is smart. The idea is intriguing and puts an unusual spin on things. That said, I fear that you are falling a little ...

Wow. This is heavy. Seven years down the line and a eulogy of this magnitude... I really am speechless. On the literature side of things, I will offer no advice. ...

Hey there, I am an orthodox Jew, and consider myself a Zionist despite the fact that I can't see myself making aliya for quite a while. It is great to ...

Hey there, This review is only on the prologue and chapter 1. To be perfectly honest, I find your writing to be extremely difficult to read. This is because you ...

Hi, Forgive me if I'm rusty, but this is my first review in several months. As I read, it seemed to me that you were going for an epic "Lord ...

Hey Anna and Puckerman, This is primarily a review of Puckerman reviewed on his own review, but feel free to listen in, Anna. Hopefully this will prove useful feedback for ...

Hey Yubbies and Louis, This is really a review of Louis' review, Yubbies, but feel free to listen in, as it pertains to you too. So, Louis, here is your ...

Hey Freedom Girl, Let's talk about your writing. I'm going to keep this review short, so as not to give you so much advice that you don't know where to ...

Hey Shadow, As is my usual style, I'm going to give you general feedback, and I will be rather candid because I think you can handle it. This did not ...

Okay, for this review I'm taking out my katana. Beware, because I'm getting serious now, and I'm going to review this piece like a ninja cutthroat. This chapter disappointed me ...