Markontheworld

Interesting, same theme as "Vicky.....Not so Icky?" Except this time the one hurting hasn't intentionally tried to kill anything, and people try to give her a chance. Not that I ...

Awwwwwww, so flubernuggeting cute!!! Vicky's backstory was kinda sad, even more so cause I know it's true. Something tells me that hug made Vicky the happiest she's been in a ...

Vicky and Timmy? Not something I saw coming, but hey still surprisingly cute. Wait, what'll happen to Cosmo and Wanda now that Timmy's in love with one of the only ...

Hmmmmmmm it was interesting, I really enjoyed this. Especially the part where you wrote "Bats flit like the thoughts that have gotten our of my head and freed me." A ...

I found it interesting to say the least. I can understand it really clearly, people can be really mean at times. However, I don't believe that they're always mean they ...

Awwwwww! So flubbing adorable! l 3 I only wish I knew the kids name so I could root him on myself. Since I don't know what it is I'm dubbing ...

Oh I get it! Like looking underneath the underneath could save you in more ways than one. In this case it would be from dying. The horseman, unfortunately, did not ...

Well I can see that the narrator is plane sick, but I don't know why? I'm sorry I just don't get the purpose of this poem. I feel like it ...

Oh man do I know what that's like! Especially where you wrote "Terrified of never connecting, Never moving forward, Of always standing still?" However after a while it becomes more ...

It took me a few times to get the meaning, but I think I finally got it! The first line is the key, this is about death. More specifically someone's ...

Well the first thing I noticed was that the beat to "The A Team" fits your first 3 lines perfectly. Other than that it was like you were telling her ...

Wow you're a really great writer. Terrance's character was my favorite and not just because he's the main character, but because of how literal he was. It brought a really ...

At times it's kinda hard to see it, cause the other aspects of your stand out more, but this is a very beautiful poem. Love, I don't know whether it's ...

I get it, but I feel like it would make more sense if you added commas. I might be wrong, but the person's a vampire, right? Or at least she ...

Oh man, this was the perfect mixture of randomness and hilarity. Yes something can be random and not hilarious. I know weird, right? Anyways you made a few wording mistakes, ...